Kuribayashi: wise bass18: If you're up for suggestions I have a semi-viable plot for your story.
The story starts off with the coalition and the 2 kingdoms that dispise eachother and each plan to rule the entire kingdom with a futile takeover of their enemies.
Add some of your own details here pertaining to the original plot
About halfway through the story the climax occurs: A new threat from outside, beyond any known knowlegde of the kingdom, threatens the existance of every species you created.
To survive, the Kingdom as a whole must forget their differences and band together against this threat. And after that you can decide if the kingdom survives or if the unknown threat wipes out life in the Kingdom.
Use your Uber creativity to devise the rest of the story . Sorry if my idea is not "original", I am the opposite of "artistic". I tried not to make it sound Halo related, the outside thread doesn't have to aliens, I'm sure you can think of something.
I hope this post was not a huge waste of 10 minutes of my life or a 3 minute waste of yours : ) Happy face emoticon?
The Co-alition start off on the edge of war with the two Empires, I will put in the little push that makes them take up arms.
The new Threat would have to be the Scourge. The evil creatures. Such as Demons, Sluagh and Werewolves.
That is what I was going to do, have them band together, but I would first have to have them realise the great evil of the Scourge by them almost wiping out one of the Empires. But I'm not sure which one...
You just outlined what I was going to do with my story, GREAT JOB!
Thanks by the way.
Telapathy? Or the sheer unoriginality of my ideas? DUN DUN DUNDUNDUN DUN N N N N N N ..........
I am Aloysius's best cub scout!
But now I have a new heart to win over.