Echo of the Past

Last post 10-04-2009, 4:10 PM by Nocbl2. 25 replies.
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  •  08-28-2009, 7:24 AM 709000 in reply to 684830

    Re: Echo of the Past

    This message is directed at the author, due to PM's crashing and not sending i find them no longer reliable.

    I wish to know a few things about your FF/Novel to make a Datbase thread in which new readers can find your FF/Novel Easly and quickly, and make sure its the story for them.

    • Name of FF/Novel:
    • Author
    • What the story is ablout breifly:
    • Mainly focused around what universe:
    • What race is the story about? Eg: If the universe is halo then "Humans" or "Covenant"
    • Story Genre:

    If you  could supply me with this basic in it would be a great help, Please both PM and publicly post your answers please.


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  •  08-28-2009, 11:54 AM 709190 in reply to 709000

    Re: Echo of the Past

    • Echo of the Past
    • tmspartan
    • After a brief period of peace the Flood has returned, and it is determined to reach its former glory. They recently infected a UNSC military base and the Destroyer Achilles' Heel is unwillingly drawn here and left with no escape.
    • Halo Universe (Post-Halo 3)
    • Humans
    • Horror

    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  08-28-2009, 12:33 PM 709238 in reply to 709190

    Re: Echo of the Past

    Yet again!
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  •  08-28-2009, 1:01 PM 709264 in reply to 684813

    Re: Echo of the Past

    I like it very much and am looking forward to finishing once completed. I'm not trying to be an editor or anything but "The spider-like creature rained down from the ceiling, bombarding his allies." I had to re-read that sentence a few times before realizing that creatures should be plural.  It could confuse some and mess up the flow of storytelling like it did for me.

    That aside

    Great  : )


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  •  08-29-2009, 12:10 PM 710257 in reply to 709264

    Re: Echo of the Past

    Ah well Chapter 1 is finally finished. And we finally get into the better parts of my story.
    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  08-29-2009, 2:50 PM 710390 in reply to 710257

    Re: Echo of the Past

    Hey i loved it.. worst part about ff's are that they arent long enough X( same with halo books theres not enough of them i want more..

     

    congrats nice story


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  •  09-03-2009, 5:50 PM 715447 in reply to 707599

    Re: Echo of the Past

    Question as to the prolog. Was the ship UNSC as i think it was or was it Covenant? If it was UNSC then wouldnt the marines have self destructed the ship by the time they were the last survivors?
    The Eayn Tribute: Read about the life of a jackal, who fights back during a rebellion against the covenant, and must struggle to remain alive as the Covenant fight the small group of rebels.

    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/804296.aspx

  •  09-03-2009, 5:57 PM 715454 in reply to 715447

    Re: Echo of the Past

    The marines were stuck in the Med bay, it was a surprise assault and the Flood quickly spread throughout the ship.
    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  09-04-2009, 5:29 PM 716323 in reply to 715454

    Re: Echo of the Past

    ahh ok thanks
    The Eayn Tribute: Read about the life of a jackal, who fights back during a rebellion against the covenant, and must struggle to remain alive as the Covenant fight the small group of rebels.

    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/804296.aspx

  •  10-04-2009, 1:23 PM 740590 in reply to 684813

    Re: Echo of the Past

    It took a while but Chapter 2 is up, and the real plot reveals itself.
    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  10-04-2009, 4:10 PM 740672 in reply to 684853

    Re: Echo of the Past

    Hm. Interesting. Description is neat and clean. Like it. Would you mind checking out Outpost?
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