Anders and the Arbiter

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  •  07-14-2009, 5:12 PM 654188 in reply to 654136

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    I FJ I:

    ^^

    But that stuff really doesnt matter.

    This is a Fan Fiction. He is a fan, and he wrote some fiction. Last time i check fiction is made up, and fake.

    This story losely set in the Halo verse, so its in the correct place. I thought i was funny and entertaining. Who carse the dates are out, or when a pelican was made?

    This is a place for people to write stories, or short pieces of writing that have been inspierd by halo. Your not a very welcoming crowed for new writers. You should be ashamed for how negative you have all been about it. It was a nice story that made me laugh thinking about a castle or the arbiter.

    Felix: Your community are asses!

    There is a fine line between writing fan-fictions that are well thought out and well researched, and writing stories that have no cohesive plot or character development. They asked what we though of these stories, and I responded according to my reaction. Shame on you for dismissing my opinion as invalid because you were tickled by it's immaturity.

    Who cares if the dates and canon are correct? Let me inform you on this; we care. We of the serious FF community crave stories that make sense- not half-baked inter-species furry erotica. If you want accepting critics of those then I suggest you move to Deviant Art or Livejournal. Criticism will always be found, and while I've been harsh and unforgiving in these stories, I've also tried to lay down guidelines on writing a good Fan Fiction. Have a plot, follow canon (or at least bend it appropriately), have believable, interactive characters. These stories have none.

    As a final note, we are not Felix's community, we are his colleagues, and he is ours. There is no ownership based on post count, nor is there superiority in writing styles based on that count. Your assumptions and misbegotten beliefs on that matter do nothing to belie your lot in this community.


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    The Interrogation of Ellen Anders

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  •  07-14-2009, 6:35 PM 654268 in reply to 654136

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    I FJ I:

    ^^

    But that stuff really doesnt matter.

    Some canon should be retained in the writing of a halo fan fiction, no matter if it is a comedy one or not.

    This is a Fan Fiction. He is a fan, and he wrote some fiction. Last time i check fiction is made up, and fake.

    Fan fiction has to at least be based around the storyline the fan fiction is set.

    This story losely set in the Halo verse, so its in the correct place. I thought i was funny and entertaining. Who carse the dates are out, or when a pelican was made?

    No, there is no setting in the Halo Universe. It mentions a planet in passing and we have the Arbiter in an unknown location, with a sex robot who is in a human model. The fact is, I don't find this junk funny, I find it a retarded attempt at being noticed. Of course all the newer members will read it and laugh, ebcause they're all; quite frankly, idiots in a sense.

    This is a place for people to write stories, or short pieces of writing that have been inspierd by halo. Your not a very welcoming crowed for new writers. You should be ashamed for how negative you have all been about it. It was a nice story that made me laugh thinking about a castle or the arbiter.

    This was inspired by Ander's apparently being a sexy CGI characters... And how funny and hilarious would it be if the Arbiter made love to her! Oh-ho, my sides ache...

    We are very welcoming of new writers, just not when the stuff they write is utter garbage. it looks as though some people who burn out their Halo Wars disks thought it would be awesome to put up a story with no plot, barely any Halo setting, with the Arbiter and Ander's having sex... wow. All I can say is, wow...

    We should be ashamed? I will ignore that because I have basically put that all to rest, above me.

    You laugh thinking about a castle... You must p*ss yourself laughing when you go to visit some ruins then... The Arbiter is funny? Why? Because he's an alien?

     

    Felix: Your community are asses!

    And your community are morons.


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  •  07-14-2009, 6:54 PM 654282 in reply to 654136

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    I FJ I:

    ^^

    But that stuff really doesnt matter.

    This is a Fan Fiction. He is a fan, and he wrote some fiction. Last time i check fiction is made up, and fake.

    This story losely set in the Halo verse, so its in the correct place. I thought i was funny and entertaining. Who carse the dates are out, or when a pelican was made?

    This is a place for people to write stories, or short pieces of writing that have been inspierd by halo. Your not a very welcoming crowed for new writers. You should be ashamed for how negative you have all been about it. It was a nice story that made me laugh thinking about a castle or the arbiter.

    Felix: Your community are asses!

    It does, more then you know.

    That's all well and good, but it should at least have some kind of story progression, a narrative, just some kind of consistancy in your story. This attempt has none of that, seeming to be a random jumble of ideas, which haven't been properly thought out.

    Even when we wrote out the canon and just messed around, we still had some evidence of story progression and a narrative you could follow.

    This is a place where people write stories, and I have seen it expand and grow, hell my first work and the works of several very talented writers got this made in the first place. You should be ashamed for poking your nose in where you don't understand. The best way to learn how to be better is through constructive criticism. If you just praise a poorly written mess as good, they are never going to improve. It's harsh, but in the long term it helps more.

    If you want a good story, this is how it's done.

    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/211135.aspx

     


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  •  07-14-2009, 7:11 PM 654295 in reply to 654136

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    I FJ I:

    ^^

    But that stuff really doesnt matter.

    This is a Fan Fiction. He is a fan, and he wrote some fiction. Last time i check fiction is made up, and fake.

    This story losely set in the Halo verse, so its in the correct place. I thought i was funny and entertaining. Who carse the dates are out, or when a pelican was made?

    This is a place for people to write stories, or short pieces of writing that have been inspierd by halo. Your not a very welcoming crowed for new writers. You should be ashamed for how negative you have all been about it. It was a nice story that made me laugh thinking about a castle or the arbiter.

    Felix: Your community are asses!

    What the hell?  Ok, you put my name in a thread, so I am going to assume you want an ass wooping...in knowledge.

    FF are stories.  Stories are meant to tell you things and make sense.  This "FF" did neither.  Cronstructive cristism(I'm sure you know about this right?) is meant to help(I don't know how you can help this mess though).  It helped me through my first two fanfics, whiched sucked entirely.  You sure, do not belong here.  You should go back to your cave of MP and stay there.  You have no idea what makes a good story, so I say to you, get out.

    Have a nice day.


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  •  07-14-2009, 7:12 PM 654296 in reply to 654188

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    Spartan R41:
    I FJ I:

    ^^

    But that stuff really doesnt matter.

    This is a Fan Fiction. He is a fan, and he wrote some fiction. Last time i check fiction is made up, and fake.

    This story losely set in the Halo verse, so its in the correct place. I thought i was funny and entertaining. Who carse the dates are out, or when a pelican was made?

    This is a place for people to write stories, or short pieces of writing that have been inspierd by halo. Your not a very welcoming crowed for new writers. You should be ashamed for how negative you have all been about it. It was a nice story that made me laugh thinking about a castle or the arbiter.

    Felix: Your community are asses!

     I suggest you move to Deviant Art

    Leave that place out of it. Its a good place.

    THIS STORY SUCKS.


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  •  07-14-2009, 7:20 PM 654301 in reply to 654296

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    I think anders and the arbiter is a pretty cool story. ti has aleins sex and doesn't afraid of anything...
  •  07-14-2009, 7:23 PM 654304 in reply to 654301

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    Violaterr:I think anders and the arbiter is a pretty cool story. ti has aleins sex and doesn't afraid of anything...

    ...

    I just lost half of my brain cells reading this crap.


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  •  07-14-2009, 7:26 PM 654307 in reply to 654304

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    Can all the horny little Halo wars players please go to other sites because

    THIS IS A PORN SITE OR MADE FOR STORY WITH SUCH A LOVE OUTER SPIECALS INTERNEST.  {SP}

    In english its GET THE *** OFF OR ATLEAST OUT OF THE LILIBARY ON HALO WARS


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  •  07-14-2009, 7:29 PM 654313 in reply to 654268

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    You are acting like the libary keeper. Shuffling along the coridoors, casting your critical eye upon anything that should happen to pass the sacred shelvs.

    You "seniors" arnt the only members who read or post in this section. Like it or not, us unclean, vile and discusting new members pass your hallowed keep from time to time in search of an enjoyable piece of writing. I, like many, have next to no idea about the halo story other than Master Chief kills Alien dudes. Your stories that follow the cannon perfectly are wasted on 99.9% of Halo players because we arnt impressed with your Halo knowledge. We are after an entertaining piece of writting, that includes elements from Halo. Not a historicly accurate essay!

    This story deliverd what people want. Im not saying its the only one, but this is on example, and you "seniors" ridicule his knowledge of the cannon and discarded his efforts, like you seniors have been discarded fom this site. The "seniors" on the site are the only people who actually care about the cannon, and you make up but a small minority of the site. Someone from the dreded MP section attempts to post and he gets shot down, and harshly at that. You dont have some over ruling authority on the site, more specificly this section. No one made you guys rulers or judges of fan fiction, but your acting like you are.

    If you ask me, this here is prime example why most of you got banned, and are disliked by the rest of the Halo community. We are all havng fun, making videos, discussing strategy and hostng live stream events while you guys wallow in the FF cave, discussing the historical accuracy of finite details not even the Halo devs care about. As soon as an outsider steps in you swiftly make it known you dont like them. Then hide behind your grammer and sentence structure and call us unclutured fools who run and gun.

    Youve totaly missed the point of Fan Fiction. He is a Fan who wrote some Fiction. Theres nothing more to FF.

    You have a dislike towards anyone with a low post count, or anyone who cant recall the date a pelican was made. Then you act like none of that matters, when quite clearly it does. Maybe if you where a bi more accepting and patient more of you would still be around, and more of the community would like you.

    P.S. Perhaps you should tell Felix that ones post count has nothing to do with a community. Because he seems to think anyone outside the FF section is part of mine.


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  •  07-14-2009, 7:36 PM 654320 in reply to 654313

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    I FJ I:

    You are acting like the libary keeper. Shuffling along the coridoors, casting your critical eye upon anything that should happen to pass the sacred shelvs.

    You "seniors" arnt the only members who read or post in this section. Like it or not, us unclean, vile and discusting new members pass your hallowed keep from time to time in search of an enjoyable piece of writing. I, like many, have next to no idea about the halo story other than Master Chief kills Alien dudes. Your stories that follow the cannon perfectly are wasted on 99.9% of Halo players because we arnt impressed with your Halo knowledge. We are after an entertaining piece of writting, that includes elements from Halo. Not a historicly accurate essay!

    This story deliverd what people want. Im not saying its the only one, but this is on example, and you "seniors" ridicule his knowledge of the cannon and discarded his efforts, like you seniors have been discarded fom this site. The "seniors" on the site are the only people who actually care about the cannon, and you make up but a small minority of the site. Someone from the dreded MP section attempts to post and he gets shot down, and harshly at that. You dont have some over ruling authority on the site, more specificly this section. No one made you guys rulers or judges of fan fiction, but your acting like you are.

    If you ask me, this here is prime example why most of you got banned, and are disliked by the rest of the Halo community. We are all havng fun, making videos, discussing strategy and hostng live stream events while you guys wallow in the FF cave, discussing the historical accuracy of finite details not even the Halo devs care about. As soon as an outsider steps in you swiftly make it known you dont like them. Then hide behind your grammer and sentence structure and call us unclutured fools who run and gun.

    Youve totaly missed the point of Fan Fiction. He is a Fan who wrote some Fiction. Theres nothing more to FF.

    You have a dislike towards anyone with a low post count, or anyone who cant recall the date a pelican was made. Then you act like none of that matters, when quite clearly it does. Maybe if you where a bi more accepting and patient more of you would still be around, and more of the community would like you.

    P.S. Perhaps you should tell Felix that ones post count has nothing to do with a community. Because he seems to think anyone outside the FF section is part of mine.

    First of all, constructive critisism. 'nuff said there. And why the heck do you keep on trying drag Felix into this discussion?

    Insanity is a virtue
  •  07-14-2009, 7:41 PM 654326 in reply to 654320

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    Im involing Felix because he came to one of my threads to specifically call me, my team and my "followers" asses. We said or did nothing, then he comes along as says that.

    EDIT: Also, its not constructive critisism. Its a total hatred of the story because its not cannon perfect. Besides, who deemed these people the judgers?

    This comes to mind. "If youve got nothing nice to stay, then dont say anything"


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  •  07-14-2009, 7:47 PM 654337 in reply to 654313

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    I FJ I:

    You are acting like the libary keeper. Shuffling along the coridoors, casting your critical eye upon anything that should happen to pass the sacred shelvs.

    That would have been a good sentence, if you could spell "Corridors" and "Shelves"... Way to fail.

    You "seniors" arnt the only members who read or post in this section. Like it or not, us unclean, vile and discusting new members pass your hallowed keep from time to time in search of an enjoyable piece of writing. I, like many, have next to no idea about the halo story other than Master Chief kills Alien dudes. Your stories that follow the cannon perfectly are wasted on 99.9% of Halo players because we arnt impressed with your Halo knowledge. We are after an entertaining piece of writting, that includes elements from Halo. Not a historicly accurate essay!

    If this is what you call enjoyable, I don't wanna know what you would find amazing.  Exactly, your disregard for the Halo story doesn't bother me, it's when you come up here and wham this crap in our faces, because you don't know balls all from what Halo Wars and its jacked up storyline tell you. We never wrote these for Halo players, we wrote these for enjoyment of ourself and to share our writings with other keen authors, do we try and impress newer members with our Halo knowledge? Is that what you think the Library is? A place for us to show off our superior Halo knowledge? Smell the f*cking coffee. Most stuff here is entertaining, it isn't my fault if you hate the good stuff and praise the crap. You just have either, 1. A despicable judgement, or 2. Very bad taste.

    This story deliverd what people want. Im not saying its the only one, but this is on example, and you "seniors" ridicule his knowledge of the cannon and discarded his efforts, like you seniors have been discarded fom this site. The "seniors" on the site are the only people who actually care about the cannon, and you make up but a small minority of the site. Someone from the dreded MP section attempts to post and he gets shot down, and harshly at that. You dont have some over ruling authority on the site, more specificly this section. No one made you guys rulers or judges of fan fiction, but your acting like you are.

    It delivered what people want? So, you're telling me now, that the Forums have degraded themselves so much, that people want to see sex scenes between the Arbiter and Ander's and read about something which has no comedic value, uses sex between two fictional characters as its main stabel joke, and delivers absolutely nothing of value to the reader? Wow... We were unfairly treated by Aloysius, you were given free reign to spam and mess up the Forums whatever way you wanted. We ridicule him because he is one big p*ss take. We help out people who actually make an attempt to write a good story, even if they can't, we still give them advice. This person, whoever they may be, is a fool, a moron, an idiot, whatever. You must have a rpetty one sided image in your head if you truly believe we hate anyone from the MP section of the Forums. You delusional p*ick. No, we're not rulers you ingorant b*stard, we are actually attempting to uphold some dignity in here, while you promote this filth. We're being realistic. You're being perverted.

    If you ask me, this here is prime example why most of you got banned, and are disliked by the rest of the Halo community. We are all havng fun, making videos, discussing strategy and hostng live stream events while you guys wallow in the FF cave, discussing the historical accuracy of finite details not even the Halo devs care about. As soon as an outsider steps in you swiftly make it known you dont like them. Then hide behind your grammer and sentence structure and call us unclutured fools who run and gun.

    It is a prime example, the new members were being absolute f*cktards, and made us look like the bad guys, exactly what you're trying to do here you stuck up p*ick. You all act like this site is just like all the MP section. Not everything here is about the game. But you make it that way, and when you find somewhere not corrupted by your Halo Wars BS, you feel the ened to come up here and wage war with us. No, we write and talk to each other about what we write, if you're so blind and ignorant you can't even see that, and you just go on rumours of what you've heard of us, then I pity you. You're just another sheep, made to believe the stereotype. All lies, and you know it. Don't try and spite us because you know we're right.

    Youve totaly missed the point of Fan Fiction. He is a Fan who wrote some Fiction. Theres nothing more to FF.

    No, the point is, to post something suitable and enjoyable. This was neither. It was disgsuting, it was pervy, it was erotic, it was everything an FF shouldn't be.

    You have a dislike towards anyone with a low post count, or anyone who cant recall the date a pelican was made. Then you act like none of that matters, when quite clearly it does. Maybe if you where a bi more accepting and patient more of you would still be around, and more of the community would like you.

    Keep telling yourself that you arrogant tw*tbag.

    P.S. Perhaps you should tell Felix that ones post count has nothing to do with a community. Because he seems to think anyone outside the FF section is part of mine.

    You're the one who insinuated it does matter, hypocrite much?


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  •  07-14-2009, 7:51 PM 654340 in reply to 654313

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    I FJ I:

    You are acting like the libary keeper. Shuffling along the coridoors, casting your critical eye upon anything that should happen to pass the sacred shelvs. Hahaha maybe because we want them to get better at writing?

    You "seniors" arnt the only members who read or post in this section. Like it or not, us unclean, vile and discusting new members pass your hallowed keep from time to time in search of an enjoyable piece of writing. I, like many, have next to no idea about the halo story other than Master Chief kills Alien dudes. Your stories that follow the cannon perfectly are wasted on 99.9% of Halo players because we arnt impressed with your Halo knowledge. We are after an entertaining piece of writting, that includes elements from Halo. Not a historicly accurate essay! You know little of the cannon which makes you less qualified to write a FF. Most of our writers are very good mind you, your looking into this section for the very first time are you not? Then this would look appealing to you, but this pales in comparison to other even mediocre stories. Were not a closed group we will allow any and everyone but we will make sure they are corrected so they can write better.

    This story deliverd what people want. Im not saying its the only one, but this is on example, and you "seniors" ridicule his knowledge of the cannon and discarded his efforts, like you seniors have been discarded fom this site. The "seniors" on the site are the only people who actually care about the cannon, and you make up but a small minority of the site. Someone from the dreded MP section attempts to post and he gets shot down, and harshly at that. You dont have some over ruling authority on the site, more specificly this section. No one made you guys rulers or judges of fan fiction, but your acting like you are.

    If you ask me, this here is prime example why most of you got banned, and are disliked by the rest of the Halo community. We are all havng fun, making videos, discussing strategy and hostng live stream events while you guys wallow in the FF cave, discussing the historical accuracy of finite details not even the Halo devs care about. As soon as an outsider steps in you swiftly make it known you dont like them. Then hide behind your grammer and sentence structure and call us unclutured fools who run and gun.

    Youve totaly missed the point of Fan Fiction. He is a Fan who wrote some Fiction. Theres nothing more to FF.

    You have a dislike towards anyone with a low post count, or anyone who cant recall the date a pelican was made. Then you act like none of that matters, when quite clearly it does. Maybe if you where a bi more accepting and patient more of you would still be around, and more of the community would like you.

    P.S. Perhaps you should tell Felix that ones post count has nothing to do with a community. Because he seems to think anyone outside the FF section is part of mine.

    I will write more later.. as for now I have to go.

     

    haha vigil :P DNM

  •  07-14-2009, 7:51 PM 654341 in reply to 654313

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    I FJ I:

    You are acting like the libary keeper. Shuffling along the coridoors, casting your critical eye upon anything that should happen to pass the sacred shelvs.

    better then trying to turn a T site into M

    You "seniors" arnt the only members who read or post in this section. Like it or not, us unclean, vile and discusting new members pass your hallowed keep from time to time in search of an enjoyable piece of writing. I, like many, have next to no idea about the halo story other than Master Chief kills Alien dudes. Your stories that follow the cannon perfectly are wasted on 99.9% of Halo players because we arnt impressed with your Halo knowledge. We are after an entertaining piece of writting, that includes elements from Halo. Not a historicly accurate essay!

    Nobody ever said you are unclean and vile. People may say there noobes and may not like you but if something is shot down its because its wrong and out of place. We welcome new people but only thoughs who care about there FF not somebody writing because there bored or wanted to test something.

    This story deliverd what people want. Im not saying its the only one, but this is on example, and you "seniors" ridicule his knowledge of the cannon and discarded his efforts, like you seniors have been discarded fom this site. The "seniors" on the site are the only people who actually care about the cannon, and you make up but a small minority of the site. Someone from the dreded MP section attempts to post and he gets shot down, and harshly at that. You dont have some over ruling authority on the site, more specificly this section. No one made you guys rulers or judges of fan fiction, but your acting like you are.

    Because FF should be kept at a level of were its clean for all veiwers couse this should't even be called a FF

    If you ask me, this here is prime example why most of you got banned, and are disliked by the rest of the Halo community. We are all havng fun, making videos, discussing strategy and hostng live stream events while you guys wallow in the FF cave, discussing the historical accuracy of finite details not even the Halo devs care about. As soon as an outsider steps in you swiftly make it known you dont like them. Then hide behind your grammer and sentence structure and call us unclutured fools who run and gun.

    What if that outside is standing on a fence leaning towards rated M contect for a game thats rate T.

    Youve totaly missed the point of Fan Fiction. He is a Fan who wrote some Fiction. Theres nothing more to FF.

    Fan fac - a story based in the timeline and placing of game or anything elsa.

    You have a dislike towards anyone with a low post count, or anyone who cant recall the date a pelican was made. Then you act like none of that matters, when quite clearly it does. Maybe if you where a bi more accepting and patient more of you would still be around, and more of the community would like you.

    How dare you say *** agaest thoughs who have been banned. if you never meant them or seen them how can you have anything too say. If they were still around this site would still be such a cleaner and much more fousced place then it is now. So don't you dare talk about the fallen as though they were crap

    P.S. Perhaps you should tell Felix that ones post count has nothing to do with a community. Because he seems to think anyone outside the FF section is part of mine.

    Bold


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  •  07-14-2009, 7:52 PM 654343 in reply to 654326

    Re: Anders and the Arbiter

    I FJ I:

    Im involing Felix because he came to one of my threads to specifically call me, my team and my "followers" asses. We said or did nothing, then he comes along as says that.

    EDIT: Also, its not constructive critisism. Its a total hatred of the story because its not cannon perfect. Besides, who deemed these people the judgers?

    This comes to mind. "If youve got nothing nice to stay, then dont say anything"

    Well, to be honest, any critisism is good critisism. It shows him that he should put more effort into it. This is the FF section as well. We are all judges, even though they have been here longer which doesn't really matter even though you keep bringing it up for some weird reason, they have just as much right to say their meaning as everybody else here. And even if it's not positive, it's still critisism to take into account.


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