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Last post 06-26-2009, 9:27 PM by MrGrenade. 36 replies.
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  •  06-22-2009, 11:06 PM 630774 in reply to 630723

    Re: The Resistance

    Nocbl2:EPICNESS
    Gracias Nocbl I didn't think you would like it
    When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

    Gamertag= xxMrGrenadexx

    New story- The Resistance
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx

  •  06-23-2009, 10:38 AM 631101 in reply to 627177

    Re: The Resistance

    A short bridge chapter is up to give you a taste of what Grant dreams about sometimes. And to show what Grant dreams between chapter 1 and 2 because it slightly effects him in later chapters
    When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

    Gamertag= xxMrGrenadexx

    New story- The Resistance
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx

  •  06-23-2009, 10:52 AM 631121 in reply to 631101

    Re: The Resistance

    Nobody cares
    When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

    Gamertag= xxMrGrenadexx

    New story- The Resistance
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx

  •  06-23-2009, 11:52 AM 631192 in reply to 631121

    Re: The Resistance

    It's good, but more clarity on the subject could be given, unless a cryptic, incomplete message is what you're going for.

    But I wouldn't expect too many comments until later because that's when everyone gets on.

    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

  •  06-23-2009, 5:05 PM 631656 in reply to 631192

    Re: The Resistance

    It's supposed to be jumbled up and confusing, the point is to confuse but at the same time intrigue the reader
    When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

    Gamertag= xxMrGrenadexx

    New story- The Resistance
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx

  •  06-23-2009, 8:20 PM 631919 in reply to 631656

    Re: The Resistance

    I'm about to get off so any last comments before I do?

    When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

    Gamertag= xxMrGrenadexx

    New story- The Resistance
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx

  •  06-24-2009, 10:51 AM 632379 in reply to 631192

    Re: The Resistance

    tmspartan:

    It's good, but more clarity on the subject could be given, unless a cryptic, incomplete message is what you're going for.

    But I wouldn't expect too many comments until later because that's when everyone gets on.

    Looks like you were wrong lol. By the way, Chapter 2 is going ot be up soon. I don't hitnk anybody cares really :P
    When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

    Gamertag= xxMrGrenadexx

    New story- The Resistance
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx

  •  06-24-2009, 11:30 AM 632428 in reply to 632379

    Re: The Resistance

    No, no-one cares if you drop down dead right now. =P

    Seriously though I hope you continue with this.

    Spess mehrens

  •  06-24-2009, 11:32 AM 632429 in reply to 632428

    Re: The Resistance

    twigggy:

    No, no-one cares if you drop down dead right now. =P

    Seriously though I hope you continue with this.

    Well thank you twiggy. I'm writing chapter 2 now
    When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

    Gamertag= xxMrGrenadexx

    New story- The Resistance
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx

  •  06-24-2009, 12:47 PM 632520 in reply to 632429

    Re: The Resistance

    New chapter is up. It probably has the riskiest plot twist I have ever taken, but it was a risk I like please leave comments
    When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

    Gamertag= xxMrGrenadexx

    New story- The Resistance
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx

  •  06-24-2009, 1:13 PM 632547 in reply to 627177

    Re: The Resistance

    Now I'm just straight up confused, good addition though, I want some explanations though...
    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

  •  06-24-2009, 1:16 PM 632551 in reply to 632547

    Re: The Resistance

    The explanations will come soon do not worry. It's all about that piece of paper
    When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

    Gamertag= xxMrGrenadexx

    New story- The Resistance
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx

  •  06-24-2009, 3:21 PM 632639 in reply to 627180

    Re: The Resistance

    MOAR EPICNESS!
    Tank > Banshee

  •  06-24-2009, 3:21 PM 632640 in reply to 632551

    Re: The Resistance

    you know people may not comment in this story's but people do read them, I come here often and read fan-fics, I just dont normally comment because I am not the type fo person you want tips on writing from. lol

    nice story by the way keep it up...OR ELSE!

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  •  06-24-2009, 3:23 PM 632643 in reply to 632640

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    studmuffin:

    you know people may not comment in this story's but people do read them, I come here often and read fan-fics, I just dont normally comment because I am not the type fo person you want tips on writing from. lol

    nice story by the way keep it up...OR ELSE!

    Yeah I realize that I just prefer for people to comment just so I know they had read it. And thanks, I wasn't sure that twist was going to be a flop or actually work

    When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

    Gamertag= xxMrGrenadexx

    New story- The Resistance
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx
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