Oooo another OB FF can't wait to see the real action.

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"Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

People say Halo fanboys are annoying. They obviously haven't met a CoD fanboy.

I read them a few hours ago, just didn't comment. The landing force get on Doisac, the main character has his ass saved, you introduce gavin :D.

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

Lol. I thought you would like it.

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In my times, the darkened days.
Evil invaded the world.
We farmers; We workers of the Red Union.
We united and killed them all.
The brave soul, above the evil.
Planted our inspiration atop their burning cities.
- Ruski

Gavin should be in it more!

And almost finished the Prologue.

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

Okay, there's the chapter! Enjoy, wrote in half an hour, it should be pure gold!

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

Wow that was interesting, going through each of the five senses, very orginal.

What about the Sixth sense though? (ROFL)

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"Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

People say Halo fanboys are annoying. They obviously haven't met a CoD fanboy.

Offensive Bias:Okay, there's the chapter! Enjoy, wrote in half an hour, it should be pure gold!

 

What!!! 

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VGamerJoe:

When I get a nice little kitty, I'm going to name it Aloysius.

Offensive Bias:Okay, there's the chapter! Enjoy, wrote in half an hour, it should be pure gold!

It was good. Nice pun, btw.

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In my times, the darkened days.
Evil invaded the world.
We farmers; We workers of the Red Union.
We united and killed them all.
The brave soul, above the evil.
Planted our inspiration atop their burning cities.
- Ruski

READ IT!

After the hype for the *** chapter, I expected more comments...

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

wow! just *** awsome! this IS pure gold! i liked the way you set it out as well.

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just call me R!zZle BiZzl£, it was my '08 account... i joined on 09-19-2008.
WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?.....YEEAAH!

I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass, faster than a fat ***, who sat down too fast.

It was good and interesting, at least you get comments on yours, I just posted the Prologue for Spirits of Reach and I get nothing...

Well it is a good pilot perspective, five senses very original as I said before.

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"Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

People say Halo fanboys are annoying. They obviously haven't met a CoD fanboy.

riddle bang:wow! just *** awsome! this IS pure gold! i liked the way you set it out as well.

I worked hard on that to make the scene as clear as I could. To make you feel the pain of the Pilot as he burned to death in a small, confined space, and the only hope for his survival, is embedded in a wall of flame.

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

tmspartan:

It was good and interesting, at least you get comments on yours, I just posted the Prologue for Spirits of Reach and I get nothing...

Well it is a good pilot perspective, five senses very original as I said before.

Oh, I read. I love the way you told me what happened at the battle for Reach, and then just whammed in your Plot at the end.

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

Very Interesting, looking forward to more

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Halo Return of the Covenant. Chapter 4 Up
http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/751939.aspx
UNSC and Covenant Factions remade v2. Infantry Poll up
http://www.halowars.com/forums/734015/ShowThread.aspx#734015

Offensive Bias:

riddle bang:wow! just *** awsome! this IS pure gold! i liked the way you set it out as well.

I worked hard on that to make the scene as clear as I could. To make you feel the pain of the Pilot as he burned to death in a small, confined space, and the only hope for his survival, is embedded in a wall of flame.

A very bad way to die, I might add.

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In my times, the darkened days.
Evil invaded the world.
We farmers; We workers of the Red Union.
We united and killed them all.
The brave soul, above the evil.
Planted our inspiration atop their burning cities.
- Ruski