FF: Echos of the Past

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  •  10-22-2008, 8:08 PM 392619 in reply to 392611

    Re: Spartan F115


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  10-26-2008, 11:22 PM 394989 in reply to 392619

    Re: Spartan F115

    updated
    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  10-28-2008, 8:52 PM 396069 in reply to 394989

    Re: Spartan F115

    Small update, any comments at all on the last two sections?

    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  10-28-2008, 10:31 PM 396202 in reply to 396069

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    Re: Spartan F115

    I just read it, good job. I have no problems with it as of yet. Great job and keep it up.
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  •  11-02-2008, 4:43 PM 398687 in reply to 396202

    Re: Spartan F115

    Updated

     

    Present Day: 20:03


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  11-02-2008, 4:48 PM 398695 in reply to 398687

    Re: Spartan F115

    WTF! What were those qoutes. did u mess em up on purpose or forget them.

    "Child ofmy enemy y have u come? I offer no forgiveness for fathers sins, passed to his son."

    Come on.


    YEAH! TU4 lookin good!

  •  11-02-2008, 4:50 PM 398697 in reply to 398695

    Re: Spartan F115

    Those are not exact quotes, they are not from halo and therefore do not have to be the same

    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  11-03-2008, 8:15 PM 399513 in reply to 398697

    Re: Spartan F115

    Come on, someone has to have comments

    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  11-04-2008, 6:42 PM 399956 in reply to 399513

    Re: Echos of the Past

    New title

    Comments...

    No?

    *whistles to self*


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  11-10-2008, 4:13 PM 402516 in reply to 399956

    Re: Echos of the Past

    Update

    First update under the new title!

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    Two weeks earlier

    20:18

     

                “Wait, I…need…a…break.” Ward gasped as he collapsed to the ground and rolled himself over. “Why are we in such a hurry? We lost them hours ago,” He gasped and collapsed into the grass.

               

                Kurtz gave Susan a worried glance, “You okay Sus, you don’t look to good.”

     

                “I’m fine,” she shrugged off the question and stared at Mark. He leaned back and planted himself next to a tree. “Why did this happen, how could they forget about us?” she started sobbing. “It’s my fault he’s dead.”

     

                Kurtz stood up and put his arm around her. “Hey, it’s not your fault Sus, no one could have seen that coming. We all knew what we were getting into, Alph made sure of that. Come here.” He led her to a tree and they both sat down. “Take a break, we all need you at your best.” He grinned at her, “You know how we are without you.”

     

    She smiled and nodded. “Good, you rest. Me and Mark ’ll keep watch.” She gave him a concerning glance, “It’ll be fine. You don’t trust us anymore?” They both laughed. Finally, she lay down, slowly falling asleep.

     

    Mark turned to him, “You really believe that?”

     

    “Right now, I don’t know what to believe,” he replied, “anything could happen now, anything, and I think I’d believe it.”

     

    The radio cracked to life, “This is captain… Vestal of the frigate End of the Road, is anybody there?”

     

    Mark sighed, “Do you believe now?”

     
    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  11-10-2008, 8:03 PM 402577 in reply to 402516

    Re: Echos of the Past

    Added a prologue

    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  11-10-2008, 8:51 PM 402592 in reply to 402577

    Re: Echos of the Past

    Fixed some vague points

    I'm going to keep updating this.

    If you like that, post a comment

    If not, post why


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  11-12-2008, 3:11 PM 403289 in reply to 392016

    Re: Echos of the Past

    This is it, the end of Chapter one, look for chapter two soon.

    First post will be re-designed as a chapter directory, so look for that soon too

    __________________________________ 

    Present Day

    20:19

     

                “Cover that door, seal it off” 115 yelled as he leapt through the opening.

     

                “I got it, I got it. I know how to close the *** door,” The sergeant screamed back. He slammed himself into the heavy steal door, grinding it closed. “How many of those things followed us?”

     

                The nav point hovered another thirty feet underground. “I don’t know, could be other entrances. This place isn’t even supposed to be here.” They had followed the point into an underground bunker. “Reinforced concrete, archaic, but strong, I doubt they’ll get through anytime soon.” He sighed and motioned the sergeant to follow him. “Hey, you got a name?”

     

                “Don’t see why not. Sergeant Daemon Hails, first division. I got transferred to the Road not more then a week ago. Kind of wishing I hadn’t.” They turned left and headed through a fire door. “So how about you, you Spartans have a name don’t you?” 115 grunted and kept moving. “Ah, that kind of person huh? Well then, I’ll just keep talking. It was the summer of 2530, and war was…”

     

    The sound of rifle fire filled the hall, coming from a floor down. 115 turned to him, “We have to keep moving, come on. It’s not too far now.” They reached the blast door, the nav marker floating just on the other side. “You ready?” The Hails nodded. “Alright, stand back.”

     

    He leveled his rifle and blew away the control panel. The doors slid silently apart, revealing the chamber beyond. “What the hell?” Hails muttered as an eerie orange glow filled the hall.

     

    “I don’t know, but I got the signal…” A simple, six note signal.

    __________________________________

    Two weeks earlier

    20:19

     

                “I repeat, this is Spartan 126 of Gamma squad, do you come in? Captain Vestal, please respond.” Kurtz spoke useless into the burnt out comm equipment. “Dammit, I can’t get anything else.”

     

                Susan leaned over, “Well what did you get?” She rolled and rested on her elbow.

     

                “Just a set of coordinates, nothing big. They’re about a mile from here, if you want the check.”

     

                Ward sat up, “I vote we check it,” he stood up, and for about two seconds looked brave. Then he wobbled and tumbled over.

     

                “It’s just another trap, they can do that now, mimic our voices. They lure you in and turn you. That’s how Bravo went down, it copied their CO.” Mark sagged against a tree and sighed. “We’ll never know if it’s real.”

     

                “Only one way to find out, pack up Spartans, we’re going.” Susan stood and grabbed he gear. Everyone else did the same.

     

    45 Minutes Later

     

                “Fall back, fall back. Get inside the bunker, now!” Susan rolled and let out a stream of fire on the oncoming line. “Seal the *** door!” She lobbed a grenade out of the hatch, causing bits of flesh to fly in.

     

                “Got it!” Kurtz mashed buttons on a console and the door slid closed, a ragged arm sticking out the side. “Whoa,” he ginned, “A little close, I love this job.”

     

                “Come one,” Susan waved the Spartans forward. “It’s not much farther, just a few floors down.” They moved deeper into the complex.

     

                “What is this place?” Ward asked, “Is it one of ours? We never were told about a bunker, what the hell were they doing down…”

     

                “Stop asking question you know we can’t answer,” Susan interrupted, “Keep moving.” After another minute they reached a large steal blast door. “Kurtz, open this up.”

     

                “Oh, uh, sure, I think I can get this open, just give me a sec.” He moved to the control panel. Suddenly, the doors parted, grinding across the floor. “Wait, I… didn’t do that.” A brilliant orange light filled the hall. “What is that?”

     

                The Spartans moved into the chamber towered a wall of orange, flowing liquid that split the room in two. A voice resounded in the hall, “What the hell?”

                Susan paused, “Hey Kurtz, could you send a signal into that thing?”

     

                “Uh, yeah, I’ll send one now…” Kurtz opened the signal he’d sent earlier. “There, it should go through.” Everyone held there breathe and waited. “Got something,” he smirked, “Come on through, should we?”

     

                Susan bit her lip and thought. Then, without saying anything, walked into the wall. Lights flew past here as she passed into another room. Two men stood there. One, short and dressed in green fatigues, the other standing seven feet tall clad in Mjolnir. She gasped, “Lucas?”

     

    End of chapter 1

    _________________________________


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  11-12-2008, 4:45 PM 403310 in reply to 403289

    Re: Echos of the Past


    Hooray, new first post, go see the new directory!

    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  11-12-2008, 4:46 PM 403311 in reply to 403310

    Re: FF: Echos of the Past

    Any comments on the last part of chapter one?

    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
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