Pheonix War

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  •  10-15-2008, 9:31 PM 387297 in reply to 387278

    Re: Pheonix War

    I loved it. I hope there will be more soon. You have a talent for writing. I did spot 2 mistakes but they are very small.


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  •  10-16-2008, 3:43 PM 387709 in reply to 387297

    Re: Pheonix War

    thanks guys,

    and your right bias, rereading it I did spot a few but I don't think any really warrant a fix right now.  Chapter Four should be up in about two days, probably less.


    "Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never encountered automatic weapons."
    -General Douglas MacArthur

    The Pheonix War: Pheonix Rising:
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/378844.aspx
  •  10-16-2008, 9:53 PM 388304 in reply to 387709

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    Okay, definitely less than two days, here is my good friend, Chapter four:

     

    Chapter Four

    60 hours ago

    Saunders City, New Cyprus

     

                “Get back in the *** building!” Private First Class William Vickers screamed to the group of twenty civilians that had held up and disabled the truck hauling E Company’s M41 anti-aircraft guns.

                “The bombing stopped!” one burly middle-aged man shouted back, “We can get out of here before those fighters come back!”  The group was pouring out of a one-story flat Vickers had forced them into when the Seraphs had begun strafing the area.

                “You will die out there! Get back in the building!” the soldier repeated again.

                One man wheeled around and pointed some kind of civilian shotgun at Vickers.  “We are getting out of here! I don’t care what you damned soldier boys say about it!”  As the rest of the mob ran down the four-lane street the shotgun-wielding civilian stared down the private and the two man crew of the truck.

                “Fine then, go! See what we care when your stupid ass gets shot to pieces!” roared Corporal John Burris, the truck’s driver.  He was particularly angry as the civilians had forced him to crash into the very building they were hiding in as a last-ditch attempt to secure transport out of the city.

                A chilling whine filled the air as the fool’s eyes became wide, “They’ve come! They’ve come back!”  As he said this, he raised his weapon and firing at a Phantom that was passing at low speed over the street.  His shot did nothing to harm the craft, but attracted the attention of one of the door gunners who fired as the dropship slowed and turned to face the fleeing mob.  The civilian died as the soldiers instinctively dived out of the way of a hail of plasma fire and in turn left the civilian to soak it up.

                “Back to the buildings! Back to the damned buildings! Get out of the street!”  Vickers shouted as he scrambled to his feet and dashed into the structure.  Some of the civilians tried to head forcover, others hesitated, and the last four kept trying to run.  No matter what they did, they were all still exposed to the Phantom’s forward slung heavy plasma cannon, which scythed through the crowd.  In less than two seconds twelve of the mob’s number fell to the superheated bolts and four more were injured.  After four, only one of the number, who had made it back into a coffee shop, was still alive, the rest had suffered the fate of the fool, a quick and painful death.

                The three Army personnel had managed to get inside the original shelter.  Vickers, wielding a MA5K carbine, peered around the doorjamb checking the dropship’s action.  As the Phantom lowered to the ground, two panels dropped on either side of the ship.  “They’re dumping troops!  We got infantry!”  Bill shouted to his new squadmates.

                “Roger, this building connects to some others, and I think it leads back to Eighth Street.  Delta’s CP is somewhere around there,” Corporal Burris said, a plan forming in his mind.

                “Then let’s go!” shouted the third, Private Tim Walsh, as he moved to the rear door of the entryway of the building the trio was in.

                “I’ll cover you, now leapfrog it!” shouted Vickers as he fired on the now-deployed squad of six simian Brutes and another five Grunts.  His rounds were not terribly accurate, but they scored a few glancing hits on the aliens’ apparent leader, a Brute in a dark purple armor with a slightly more ornate helmet.

                Sustained fire from the carbines, Spikers, and plasma pistols was enough to get the private to move and allow Burris to cover him from the second doorway with his M7 submachine gun.  The second Vickers was through the door, Burris peeled off and followed.  The trio followed this pattern down for thirty meters through the building and into the connecting hall before the Covenant infantry reached the soldiers’ original position, and the men continued for another twenty before the first Grunt set foot in the hall.  First was very much the worst in this scenario as the stocky alien took a full burst from Walsh, also wielding an M7.

                “In here!” shouted Burris as he made a quick turn and crashed through a door leading out of the narrow hallway.  Vickers was merely a second behind him, but Walsh was not quite as fast.

                “Gah!” the shriek of pain ripped out of Walsh’s throat as Spiker fire tore through his legs and lower back, his armor barely slowing the metal shards down.

                Vickers spun to go back for the wounded man, but a hand grabbed his armored should first.  “He’s gone, now let’s out of here!” Burris shouted dragging Vickers with him.  Trying to break free, Vickers heard a thud, like that of a meat hammer striking a steak come from the hallway.  With that, Vickers ran along with Burris and the pair darted around a corner at the back of the small storage room they had escaped into.

                Vickers did, anyway.  The corporal paused, pulling a grenade off his chest rig and arming it. Burris lobbed the grenade through the open door.  Caught exposed in the narrow hallway, practically on top of the grenade, the Brute captain had nowhere to escape to and was shredded by the detonation of the small metal device.  Two Brutes had been killed by the blast and a Grunt was wounded.  It took a second for the aliens to recover and follow the fleeing humans’ path.  Dashing through the door and continuing out of the buildings through the shop the door lead to, they could not see the humans as they came out and the new leader decided to stop for a second.

                This proved to be a fatal mistake.  Across the street, a second-story window lit up the darkness with the muzzle flash from a machine gun set up within it.  In less than three seconds, seven of the eight remaining aliens were dead and the last Grunt retreated back into the hall from which it had come.

                Burris stuck his head out and checked around the corner of the alley the pair had run to.  “Alright, they’re gone,” he said as a man signaled from the machine gun emplacement for the soldiers to cross.  Vickers and Burris took the invitation and sprinted to a double door under the window.

                A man in a Marine uniform pulled the door shut behind them as the pair entered the building.  “Delta CP, I presume?” asked Burris of the man. 

                “Right, you boys go through that door and talk to the Colonel,” the Marine pointed to a door on the right side of a narrow corridor leading back into the building.  Vickers shot the man a sideways glance and thanked him, then following Corporal Burris through the door.

                “Alright, have the platoon move up and secure that courtyard.  I don’t want the bastards to secure a drop point for any tanks,” Colonel Ryder said to a man in a major’s uniform who was operating a communications unit.  He then looked up to see two enlisted men walk into the room and salute him.  Returning the salute, he asked, “Where are you boys from?”

                “Echo, sir. We were trying to move some M41s up to our CP and got held up,” was Burris’ response.

                “What and where were you held up?” asked the Colonel as he returned his view to the map.

    “Bunch of civilians and a Phantom on Juliet Street, sir.”

                “***, have you anything else to report?”

                “No, sir, we do not,” Burris said quietly.

                “Alright, then get out of here and find Lieutenant Simms, he has a job for you,” Ryder ordered as the two saluted him and left.

                “Sir, more contacts reported,” the Major said.

                “What do we have, Gibbons?” the colonel picked up a pencil and prepared to mark his chart.

                “Three more Phantoms dropping tanks at V and Twelfth,” was the response.

                “Did those Pelicans ever get airborne?” Ryder demeanor weakened.

                “No sir, the airfield was leveled about five minutes ago,” Major Gibbons said solemnly.

                Ryder cursed, “***, I hope Simms knows what he’s doing.”

    .

                Lee dragged Meyers’ injured form into the ruins of Echo Company’s command.  “Okay, hold still, you are going to be fine,” the corporal said, trying to calm the wounded Marine.

                “Bullshit,” said Meyers through clenched teeth as he grimaced in pain originating from his shoulder wounds.

                “You always were hard-headed,” replied Nguyen as he removed the shoulder plate from the wounded man’s armor and a canister of biofoam and bandages from a satchel on his own belt.  Preparing the medical supplies Lee warned his comrade, “This might hurt a little.”

                “A little, yeah- AGH!” Meyers yelped as Lee pulled to wounds opened filled the holes with a spray of biofoam.  Switching to the bandages, he then wrapped the wounds and tied off the bandage, sealing the biofoam in.

                “Okay, that should stop the bleeding,” Lee said leaning back on his haunches.

                “***, if you ever become a doc-” the private would not finish the sentence as Nguyen slapped a hand over his mouth and dropped flat to the ground.

                “Shut up.”

                Raising his hands to protest, Meyers heard what alerted his commander and dropped them.  The eerie whine of a pair of Covenant Wraith tanks passing by in the street struck fear into both men.  More so was the fact the sloping vehicles were not alone, at least a dozen Brutes marched alongside the floating machines checking into the surrounding structures.  By some miracle, the aliens passed over the Marines, not noticing the men in the ruins.

                “This is starting to look bad,” said Lee.

                “Yeah, real bad,” agreed Meyers, his face becoming ashen.

     


    "Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never encountered automatic weapons."
    -General Douglas MacArthur

    The Pheonix War: Pheonix Rising:
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/378844.aspx
  •  10-17-2008, 9:08 AM 388514 in reply to 388304

    Re: Pheonix War

    I loves it! keep up the good work man, i joined just to get my grunty paws on good fanfics like this...hehe

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  •  10-17-2008, 6:51 PM 389000 in reply to 388514

    Re: Pheonix War

    Great story, man.  Actually incredible. 
    I have one question, according to the Spartan's service tags, they're second generation spartan three's, correct?
    In Halo ghosts of Onyx, all of the second generation spartan three's were killed except two, Tom and Lucy.  (Tom's service number was b-292)
    The third generation of spartan threes would have been released into the military before halo ce, meaning that they would have to be pretty old in this fan-fic.  I'm just looking for clarification when reading this, what generation of spartans are these?  And does it follow the spartan projects already set down by bungie?
    Kurt (spartan II) to some covy s.o.b.

    "Die? Didn't you know?... spartans never die."

    *dies*
  •  10-17-2008, 8:38 PM 389098 in reply to 389000

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    I was going to explain this in chapter six, but I guess I can give a short breakdown now.

    Anthony's ID code is 3B-025

    This breaks down as follows:

    '3'- Stands for 3rd Battalion

    'B'- Stands for Bravo Company

    '025' is Anthony's tag number created by the order in which he was admitted into 3rd Battalion, meaning he was the 25th selected for the unit.

    Also, I decided since this takes place over thirty years after Halo 3, the UNSC high command would have made a few changes to the SPARTAN Program.  This particular upgrade is Project SPARTAN-IIIB.


    "Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never encountered automatic weapons."
    -General Douglas MacArthur

    The Pheonix War: Pheonix Rising:
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/378844.aspx
  •  10-18-2008, 12:29 PM 389591 in reply to 389098

    Re: Pheonix War

    Okay, here's Five. Sorry if you find it a little short.

    Chapter Five

    60 hours ago

    Saunders City, New Cyprus

     

                “Hey, Corporal,” Vickers asked of a soldier he assumed was part of Delta Company, “we’re looking for Lieutenant Simms, any idea where he is?”

                The man pointed to a cluster of sergeants around a small table, “Over there, he’s the tall black guy.”

                “Thanks,” the private motioned to Burris and the pair walked to the cluster.

                “Lieutenant Simms?” asked Burris of the group of soldiers.

                One man, with high cheekbones and fitting the corporal’s description perfectly, lifted his head and grunted, “What do you boys need?”

                “Colonel Ryder said you needed us, sir,” was Corporal Burris’ answer.

                “Ah, good, I did need a few more troops.  Head over to the four-and-a-half on the right and move in with the squad there.  I’ll have a noncom fill you in here in a moment,” Simms dismissed the two and went back to explaining his operation to the sergeants.

                “You heard the man, now let’s move, private,” Burris moved off to the military truck the LT had indicated and Vickers was just two steps behind him.  Cashing in at four and a half tons, the M892 Heavy Transport Vehicle was the bread-and-butter of the UN Army’s ground transport divisions.  Essentially a scaled-up M12 Warthog, the vehicle had a similar forward cab and a five meter long open-air bed that could hall anything lighter than the truck itself.  However, the two trucks here had a few modifications.  Sheet-metal plating had been hastily welded to the sides of the bed and extended up an extra meter to give protection to anyone inside.

                “Looks like we gonna be riding somewhere, methinks,” quipped Vickers to his superior as the pair approached the nine men comprising the squad by the truck.

                “Hey, looks like we got a couple of reinforcements,” said one of the men indicating Burris and Vickers to the rest of his squad.

                “Looks like you’re right, private.  Who’s in charge of this unit?” demanded Burris.

                “Sergeant Harold, he’s over there with the LT,” said the same soldier.  Eying the newcomers, he also asked, “Where you two from anyway?”

                “Echo Company, command section,” said Vickers in response to the query.

                “Hmm, sorry about your unit,” the man lowered his voice thinking the two were escaping survivors from a previous fight.

                “What?” Vickers was taken aback, “I got separated from the rest.  What happened to them?”

                “Your CP went off the air about thirty minutes ago,” the private continued, “Word was it got hit by a mother of a force and most of the company got wiped out. At least, that’s what the other survivors say.”

                Vickers slouched forward, disheartened at the news of the deaths of so many he knew.  Refusing to believe a word of it, he shook his head convincing himself that the soldier was wrong and his platoon was still mostly alive.  It could not be, those men were his friends, and they would not die if he was still alive, they just couldn’t.

                “What has happened has happened,” Corporal Burris said, “Now who are you?”

                “Private Sam Lewis,” the private then started pointing at each of his squadmates in turn, “Those two are Corporals Nixon and Lee, and the rest are Privates Gaulle, Adams, Morales, Slonov, Bruske, and Hernandez.”

                “Good to see you, Corporal John Burris and Private Bill Vickers,” replied Burris.  “So what on earth are we here for anyway?”

                Corporal Lee took this one, “The LT wanted to lead an assault on the Covenant drop zone and see if we can’t force ‘em out of their LZ.”

                “What!? That’s insane, we’ll get shredded!” Vickers protested.

                Nixon chuckled, “Look up, what do you see?”

                “Nothing, why?” then it dawned on Vickers, “Oh, it’s clear and that means their air support is either gone or regrouping.”

                “Right, now you’re learning,” Nixon said before snapping into a salute.  “Sergeant.”

                “At ease, Nix,” Sergeant Harold eyed the two recent arrivals.  “Good, looks like we now got us a full squad, might make things a little easier.”  He motioned for the group to close in and listen, “LT wants us to form a convoy and smash into the hostile LZ.  Our target is just inside Echo’s old area, since it appears to be the weakest part of their line.  With any luck, we will beat them back far enough to force them to try and reestablish another position.  At the least this will keep them guessing.  Any questions?”

                “Yeah, who’s driving our truck?  Last I checked, we don’t have a driver,” the question came from one of the privates.

                “Actually, we do have a driver.  It’s me,” Burris said, not waiting for Harold to say anything.

                “What makes you think that, Corporal?”  demanded the sergeant.

                “I am a driver, but my -892 got trashed early on,” was the response.

                “Good.  Now let’s mount up troopers!” ordered the ranking man.

    .

    10 December 2583; Military Calendar

    Eighty kilometers outside Saunders City, New Cyprus

     

                “Sludge, how we doing?” Anthony-3B-025 asked of the modified Pelican’s pilot.

                Focused on his controls, the pilot answered, “Fairly well, old bird is holding together.  By the way, you boys might want to get ready, we about six minutes from the drop point.”

                “Got it,” the Spartan turned his armored form and slipped back into the cargo hold.  The five men seated in the bay looked up at him.  “Everybody ready? Good, we touch down in six minutes.”

                “About bloody time, I’ve been looking forward to this for the last week,” said Charlie.

                “You’ve only known about this op for two days.  Why the hyperbole?” responded the fourth and final squad member, Sergeant John-3B-009, better known as Jack, in the pair’s usual pre-mission discourse.

                “Waiting has made it feel like a bloody week,” finished Charlie. 

                Thomas, listening to the pair, shook his head, “Don’t you two ever get tired of saying the same thing every single time we deploy?”

                The pair replied in unison, “Nope.”

                Anthony chuckled as the trio continued to go back and forth while he opened one of the dropship’s overhead weapons lockers and pulled out his MA5K-S carbine.  A quick check proved the weapon was ready and the distinguishing flash suppressor was firmly attached.  He then pulled a box of the 40-round magazines out and loaded his weapon and then stuffed ten of the magazines into his armor’s various magazine pouches.  Finally, he grabbed an M6G pistol and six fragmentation grenades to round out his armament.

                Following his example the others did the same with their weapons.  Jack took the same loadout as Anthony, while Charlie and Thomas took their own sets.  Thomas served as the squad’s grenadier and grabbed his usual MA5D rifle, which had been modified with a forty-millimeter grenade launcher slung under it instead of the normal flashlight.  Anthony got his anticipated mixed feelings as Charlie grabbed a satchel containing twelve kilos of C12 high explosives and an M7S submachine gun.  It was just too difficult for Anthony to feel entirely safe with a pyromaniac carrying enough explosives to level a small town no matter how many operations Charlie had reliably served his purpose as a demolitions expert.

                The four finished just as the pilot came over the ship’s intercom, “Dropping in thirty, prep for dustoff landing!”  The two Marines that were in the hold with the Spartans moved to the front by the hatch to the pilot’s compartment while the commandos stacked at the rear by the craft’s exit hatch.  At fifteen seconds, the cargo door opened giving the Spartans a rear-facing view out of the craft and the M12 Warthog it carried as the vehicle hung from the magnetic clamp on the body of the craft that extended back over the hold.

                “Three, two, one, HIT IT SPARTANS!” the pilot practically screamed into the intercom.  The Pelican dropped the M12 as the craft came to pause a meter off the grass-covered ground and the Spartans leapt out into the dark.

                Anthony smiled, the night was his favorite time to hunt.

               

     


    "Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never encountered automatic weapons."
    -General Douglas MacArthur

    The Pheonix War: Pheonix Rising:
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/378844.aspx
  •  10-18-2008, 12:37 PM 389598 in reply to 389591

    Re: Pheonix War

    good job
  •  10-18-2008, 5:05 PM 389747 in reply to 389598

    Re: Pheonix War

    Thanks for the clarification on the spartan situation.
    Great story, best I've read so far.
    Kurt (spartan II) to some covy s.o.b.

    "Die? Didn't you know?... spartans never die."

    *dies*
  •  10-21-2008, 8:19 PM 392047 in reply to 389747

    Re: Pheonix War

    It has been a while, but here is six.  And if you guys would like to help, I need ideas for names of Brutes and Prophets

    Chapter Six

    58 hours ago

    Saunders City, New Cyprus

     

                “Got anything?”  asked a sniper to his spotter as he sat perched in a third-story window.

                “Nothing other than those Grunts on the turret,” came his spotter’s reply.

                “’Kay then,” the sniper clicked a small button on his helmet activating his radio, “Delta-Four, this is Angel-Nine, over.”
                A brief flare of static came through the sniper’s earpiece followed by the voice of Lieutenant Simms, “Angel-Nine, this is Delta-Four, we’re reading you loud and clear.”

                “Roger, minimal hostile contact in grid.  WOLFPACK can advance over,” the sniper said giving the go ahead for a rather risky last-ditch operation.

                “WOLFPACK forward, grid open?” it was the final query.

                “Affirmative, WOLFPACK forward,” the sniper braced for what was to come as his spotter checked to make sure his rifle was ready.

                “WOLFPACK advancing clear us a path Angel,” now it would begin.

                “Roger,” the sniper looked through the scope of his SRS99D rifle and pulled the charging handle loading a single 14.5-millimeter high-explosive round into the chamber.  Designed for making quick work of hostile light vehicles, these rounds would be more than adequate for what he was about to do.  Drawing the crosshairs across a Grunt manning a plasma cannon, he sighted in on the methane tank attached to the alien’s back.  “Week’s pay says it kills all three of the bastards and disables the gun.”

                The spotter smiled, “You’re on.  Double if it takes more than two shots for the whole crew.”

                “Deal,” the sniper slowly pulled the trigger and his rifle bucked.  A single round flew out and caught the Grunt exactly where it had been aimed.  Methane is highly combustible, even explosive, under high pressure as it was in the breathing pack carried by the alien Grunts.  This case was no exception, when the round hit five grams of mid-level explosives detonated and sent a jet of superheated metal into the tank creating a detonation roughly equivalent to a fragmentation grenade exploding.  The Grunt who had been hit was blown forward by the blast and fell off the low roof he was on, his remains burning all the way down.  Screaming, the other two were consumed in the fiery blast and died almost immediately after.

                “Blast, the gun’s toast,” the spotter turned from his scope to face his teammate, “That puts you at what, even?”

                Suppressing a laugh, the sniper replied, “Nope, week ahead.  That Chieftain bled to death, remember?”

                “Shoot now, talk later. Another one popped up, looks like a Brute behind the black car,” the spotter said quickly, moving his scope to the side and bringing his scoped MA5D to bear.

                “Got him,” the rifle bucked again, killing the Brute instantly.

                “Oh crap! Looks like we just woke up the entire friggin’ pack,” at least a dozen Brutes came out of the building below the gun nest and at least that many came sprinting from further down the street.

                “I think they see us!” the sniper said, stress rising into his voice.

                “Then start shooting!” the sniper answered his spotter’s request with two shots, emptying his magazine, forcing him to reload.  “Angel-Nine to Delta-Four, whole pack of Bravo Kilos moving on the road.  Need assistance!”

                The men heard the roar and squeal of two M12 Warthogs fishtailing around a corner onto the road the sniper team was covering before the reply came.  “Help’s here, Angel.  Now get the hell outta there!” Simms ordered over the radio.  Both of the Warthogs mounted M41 Light Anti-Aircraft Guns and the soldiers manning them added their fire to the frenzy with zeal.  12.7-millimeter rounds tore into the Covenant ranks dropping several and injuring more.  WOLFPACK began its operation with a bang and would not quit just yet.

    .

                Corporal Burris heard the machine guns’ fire before he even rounded the corner with his big truck.  He felt like an idiot driving an unarmed, only barely armored, transport into a warzone, but this was needed.  If nothing else, he would get vengeance for his lost crewmate, Walsh, and right now, he desperately wanted that.  When the battle came into view Burris shoved the gas pedal to the floor and the truck lurched forward tossing around the eighteen in the back of the vehicle.  Only three seconds later he slammed on the brakes he reached a point where one of the Warthogs had stopped, its driver killed by Brute return fire.

                “Everybody out!” Burris shouted flipping open the hatch and jumping out of the truck, SMG at the ready.  Eighteen more soldiers poured out the rear of the truck and enveloped the vehicle as two more trucks appeared and did the same thing. 

                “Forward! Give ‘em hell troopers!” shouted Sergeant Harold as he lead the men in a charge towards the faltering enemy line.  Within seconds, the air, already filled with tracers from the guns of the M12s, thickened with bullets, plasma, and shards of metal.  Screams erupted all around the men as some let out the sounds of death, others in a fit of battle fury, and even more in a subconscious attempt to intimidate the enemy.

                In eight seconds the fifty-odd men had advanced seventy meters and fell upon the alien ranks like a furious wave.  Burris joined in the fray with a burst from his weapon, hitting a Brute just as another man blasted it with a shotgun.  Another man in to the left of the corporal lunged to his left and slammed a shoulder into a Grunt, knocking it down.  He ended the life of his victim by hammering it to death with his rifle.

                As fire raining in on the humans intensified, the men dispersed finding cover wherever they could.  A pile of rubble proved more than enough for Burris as he dropped to the ground allowing the debris to take hits from rounds bound for him.  Corporal Nixon dropped next to him, and after a second popped back up to fire his MA5K, but took a Spiker round to the abdomen and dropped, screaming in pain.  Burris looked on in fear as the corporal bled to death, his wound mortal and ensuring a very slow death.   Unable to take it, Burris broke cover and sprinted up to another group of soldiers firing from behind a car, the terror of combat beginning to soak in.

    .

                Three more vehicles came in thirty seconds after the trucks.  Lieutenant Simms rode shotgun in the first M12 and ordered the driver to pull into a gap between the vehicles.  “Vincent, hit it!” he shouted to the gunner manning the Warthog’s Gauss rifle.  Solid metal slugs lanced out in rapid succession decimating a squad of Covenant firing down from a rooftop.  Fire from the recent arrivals caused a momentary slackening in the alien fire as the scale of the assault caught them totally off-guard.  Simms smiled, this was going to work.

                Dismounting, he signaled to the infantry riding in the Warthog Troop Transport variants behind him, “Let’s go!  Move right the **** now!” was his shouted order and eight men came running with him alongside the Gauss M12 as the new group advanced.  Simms raised his personal rifle and started double-tapping the trigger, firing on anything that was not human.

                As the second wave reached the first’s position, blue streaks appeared in the sky arcing down on the human infantry.  The plasma mortars struck throughout the Army ranks, wreaking havoc and decimating the formation.  “Move, move, if you don’t wanna die, MOVE!” Simms grabbed a soldier hunkered down in a doorway and pulled him out into the street, forcing him to run forward, towards the three-meter tall monsters that could tear a man in half with their hands.  Seeing the lieutenant pulling men along and taking the lead of the charge convinced many to follow, but not all.

                Of the original fifty-seven men, twenty-two joined Simms in his desperate charge and threw themselves upon the Covenant ranks.  The first charge had had momentum behind it and drove the aliens back, but now the humans had lost the initiative.  Weapons fire cut into the depleted ranks and shredded the remaining men.  Miraculously, Simms remained untouched as he came within three meters of the foremost Brute and took it out with sustained fire.  The kill emptied the rifle and the Lieutenant drew his sidearm and fired that into the next alien.  Three more creatures fell as the lone man continued his crusade. 

    It was a sight to see, a lone human fighting in a way that was inconceivable to any of his species’ minds.  Such acts rarely mark the actor with gracious survival, however.  A Brute captain appeared and whipped its Spiker into Simms’ back, the weapon’s savage blade ripping the man open and breaking his back.  This was not the end though, Simms used his arms to flip himself over and brought his weapon to bear on the Captain, firing two perfect shots into its faceplate dropping the alien instantly.  Another Brute came charging over to the crippled man’s position, ready to end the possessed spirit that was tearing through their ranks.  Simms tried to fire, but his gun was empty, so he tore a signal fragmentation grenade off his chest rig and pulled the pin.  The arming handle flew off, and with a final breath he cried over the sounds of the gunfire, “Come and get it you mother****s!”  Shrapnel ripped into the Brute, Simms, and four Grunts who were scurrying to take advantage of the man’s injuries.

    .

                Gunfire cracking nearby alerted the two Marines holed up in the ruins of Echo Company’s HQ.  “What the-?” Lee said peeking around a table he and Meyers had been hiding behind for the last hour and a half.

                “Awful lot weapons firing, especially so close,” Meyers commented, putting voice to both of their thoughts.

                “Yeah, but I thought all of Army troops had been beaten out of this sector,” Lee said while reaching for his rifle to make sure it was still there.

                Meyers put a hand up on the table and lifted himself to scan the area, “Guess not, but it might just be a counter-attack or something.”

                “Who cares? The monkeys got to be distracted by this, and that means we got a chance to get out of here,” the corporal said.  He knew he was right, as any distraction to the Covenant forces meant the pair had a good chance to make a break for it.

                “Point taken, now let’s get ready to move,” Meyers said as he tried to pull himself.  A grimace washed over his face as any movement caused his injured shoulder to throb with pain.

                Concern arose in Nguyen’s voice as he asked, “Sure you can make it?”

                “Yes, I’m sure.  It’s my shoulder, not my leg,” the Marine steadied himself and drew his pistol, “Sure you can keep up?”

                “Hell yes,” the corporal braced himself for a quick dash across the street, but paused for just a moment. “D Company’s HQ is closest, but are they even still there?”

                “Option one: sit here and die; option two: die trying to link up with the rest of our forces.  Which sounds better to you?”

                “Number two,” Lee stopped again, “Crap, footsteps.”

                “Look again, there from some of ours.”

     


    "Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never encountered automatic weapons."
    -General Douglas MacArthur

    The Pheonix War: Pheonix Rising:
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/378844.aspx
  •  10-21-2008, 8:32 PM 392053 in reply to 392047

    Re: Pheonix War

    just finished reading all ur chapters including this one..(i copy them, put them on word and read them later) and i have to say these are very well done :) keep it up, i look forward to more?
    MA5B....$50,
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  •  10-23-2008, 5:31 PM 393162 in reply to 392053

    Re: Pheonix War

    Awesome job so far man, one of the best fanfics here on halowars. Just wondering if i could get like a 1 line summary of the really major characters, cause in the scene where all the marines are preparing to attack the enemy, i was confused as hell (who are you again? lol), maybe its just me.

    "When I give food to the poor they call me a Saint, when I ask why the poor have no food, they call me a Communist."
    -Dom Hélder Câmara

    Smexy fanfics that I've read on this site so far
    -Phoenix War
    -The Untold Tales
  •  10-23-2008, 6:21 PM 393227 in reply to 393162

    Re: Pheonix War

    Thx for the new chapter :)
    Kurt (spartan II) to some covy s.o.b.

    "Die? Didn't you know?... spartans never die."

    *dies*
  •  10-24-2008, 4:51 PM 393815 in reply to 393162

    Re: Pheonix War

    Thanks again, guys;

    and Ablot, here's that summary of all the important characters in the dramatis personae:

    Rank/Name, Status, Description

    -UN Army Forces:

    Colonel Abraham Ryder, Alive, Commander of the 437th Infantry Regiment.

    Lieutenant Tyler Shafer, KIA, The commanding officer of E Company, 437th Infantry Regiment.

    Lieutenant Simms, KIA, Lieutenant presumebably attached to D Company.  Lead WOLFPACK in an attempt to retake a section of Saunders City

    Corporal John Burris, Unknown, Truck driver attached to E Company, participated in WOLFPACK.

    Private First Class Tim Walsh, KIA, Burris' crewmate.

    Private First Class William 'Bill' Vickers, Unknown, Infantryman attached to E Company's command section. Participated in WOLFPACK.

    Private Sam Lewis, Unknown, Infantryman attached to D Company.  Participated in WOLFPACK. 

    Angel-9, Alive/Alive, Sniper team in Saunders City.  Gave the go-ahead for WOLFPACK.

    -UNSC Naval Arm:

    Commander Eli Wyatt, Alive, CO of the UNSC Vigilant.

    Major Kurt Stevens, Alive, Tactical coordinator attached to the SPARTAN Program.

    'Sludge,' Alive, Pelican pilot assigned to the Vigilant.

    -UNSC Marines:

    Corporal Lee Nguyen, Alive, Originally stationed on the UNSC Peacekeeper, he was assigned to E Company upon being ordered to the ground.

    Private Vick Meyers, WIA, Nguyen's squadmate

     

    I will assume you are okay on the Spartans, at least for now.  One other thing, would you guys mind giving me a few ideas for Brute and Prophet names, I might need them eventually.


    "Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never encountered automatic weapons."
    -General Douglas MacArthur

    The Pheonix War: Pheonix Rising:
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/378844.aspx
  •  10-25-2008, 6:22 PM 394415 in reply to 393815

    Re: Pheonix War

    Thanks a bunch for the summaries man

    For brute names, you can use some ancient Greek (remember Tartarus?)
    You could also add in some primal/animal style crap...u know just combine Greek with ape and make it sound cool (not grapes...lol).
    Brutes have a warrior culture so you cant really go wrong choosing "brutish" warrior names...right?
     

    Prophets are much easier, try to use different emotions.
    Sorrow, Anger, Remorse, Discourse, Compassion, just to name a few
    You could really have some fun with this and get some sick(good) bada- sounding names.
     

    Hopefully that helped. 

    [edit] whens the new chap coming out? i want my goodies...


    "When I give food to the poor they call me a Saint, when I ask why the poor have no food, they call me a Communist."
    -Dom Hélder Câmara

    Smexy fanfics that I've read on this site so far
    -Phoenix War
    -The Untold Tales
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