oh boy oh boy another FF by Captain oh boy oh boy

can't wait till the next chap

but when the guy says

“A couple of plasma and sniper rifles. No rocket launchers. We’re not in any danger,”

shouldn't it be

“A couple of plasma and beam rifles. No Fuel Rods. We’re not in any danger,”

since its the covies? 

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Well, actually, it could be either one. After all, beam rifle=Covie sniper rifle. Fuel rod=Covie rocket launcher. He could use either one. It's just the wording; they mean the same thing.

What do you mean, another one? It's only the third...

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Officialy offline as of April 4 Australian time.

Captain Cazador- Soldato:

Well, actually, it could be either one. After all, beam rifle=Covie sniper rifle. Fuel rod=Covie rocket launcher. He could use either one. It's just the wording; they mean the same thing.

true...

but some readers can get confused 

Captain Cazador- Soldato:

What do you mean, another one? It's only the third...

only.... 

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Mr. Bacon:

but some readers can get confused

True.

Mr. Bacon:

only....

Three isn't too many.

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Officialy offline as of April 4 Australian time.

Well he might be a deticated Halo fan so much that he might want to write ff's. Or just love to write stories. or both.

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In my times, the darkened days,
Evil invaded the world.
We farmers,
We workers of the Red Union,
We united and slaughtered them all.
The brave soul,
Above the evil,
Planted our inspiration atop their burning cities.
- Ruski

The Fuel Rod gun is not a rocket launcher, it fires green bolts of radioactive gel patches that fly to a target.

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xbox Live Gamertag = SBDassassin21

A Fuel Rod Cannon is in no way like a Rocket Launcher.
It should be changed to a beam rifle, since the word Sniper is Human in origin, a term used for the Marksmen who hunted a bird called a Snipe.

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"The pain of war cannot exceed the woe of aftermath"-Led Zeppelin

Chapter one was excellent! Fast-paced, action packed, everything I could ask for:

But there were two errors:

"He shot down to grunts..." you left out the 'w', two.

"When the last of the marines was inside the building..." was should be 'were' in my opinion...

To quote you directly: I want a fan-fic with no errors!

lol, jk

You did really well, nonetheless, it's nice to be reading something from you again =D

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Chuckles

Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

Second Lieutenant Kyle Bradley:

Well he might be a deticated Halo fan so much that he might want to write ff's. Or just love to write stories. or both.

A bit of both.

Fenix:

The Fuel Rod gun is not a rocket launcher

Seath:

A Fuel Rod Cannon is in no way like a Rocket Launcher.

Okay, okay. I'd always thought of it as the Covenant rocket launcher, but I was wrong. I'll fix it. Thanks for letting me know.

Seath:

It should be changed to a beam rifle, since the word Sniper is Human in origin

The story is told through the perspective of the Human forces, therefore the terms used by Humans will be the terms used in the story. The Humans would refer to beam rifles as Covenant sniper rifles, so Covenant with beam rifles will be referred to as snipers.

Chuckles:

Chapter one was excellent! Fast-paced, action packed, everything I could ask for

Personally, I think I could have done certain bits better, but thanks.

Chuckles:

But there were two errors

Thanks for pointing them out, I'll fix them now.

Chuckles:

To quote you directly: I want a fan-fic with no errors!

Well, don't expect one.

Chuckles:

it's nice to be reading something from you again

It's nice to be writing a fan fic again.

Thanks for the feedback, guys. I'll change those errors now, thanks for pointing them out.

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Officialy offline as of April 4 Australian time.

^ No problem, thanks for listening to us!

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Chuckles

Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

Chuckles:

^ No problem, thanks for listening to us!

You thought I wouldn't?

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Officialy offline as of April 4 Australian time.

Still, even though it is similar to a Sniper Rifle, they would still probably call it a Beam rifle, the user however would probably still be called a Sniper.

Nice story BTW

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"The pain of war cannot exceed the woe of aftermath"-Led Zeppelin

Captain Cazador- Soldato:

Chuckles:

^ No problem, thanks for listening to us!

You thought I wouldn't?

Of course not.

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Chuckles

Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

Seath:

Still, even though it is similar to a Sniper Rifle, they would still probably call it a Beam rifle, the user however would probably still be called a Sniper.

Nice story BTW

I changed it so the pilot said beam rifle. Thanks for the correction.

Thanks, hopefully I'll be able to keep up to your standards.

Chuckles:

Of course not.

Good.

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Officialy offline as of April 4 Australian time.

Captain Cazador- Soldato:

Chuckles:

^ No problem, thanks for listening to us!

You thought I wouldn't?

I don't think he meant it that way. Also check your pm in about two-three minutes.

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In my times, the darkened days,
Evil invaded the world.
We farmers,
We workers of the Red Union,
We united and slaughtered them all.
The brave soul,
Above the evil,
Planted our inspiration atop their burning cities.
- Ruski