Chuckles:

^ lol, cause of our sigs, right?

Yeah.

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finally got a chance to read it

and so far i really like it.

putting the crows in the story was a good choice

can't wait for the next chap 

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Mr. Bacon:

finally got a chance to read it

and so far i really like it.

putting the crows in the story was a good choice

can't wait for the next chap 

Thanks.

Edit: would you happen to have any suggestions for improvement?

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Chapter 2 is up. Again, it's a little short, but chapter 3 won't be. 

Also, for those of you who have read my previous Fan-Fics, your right, Jenkins back!  Honestly though, if anyone has names for marines and/or ONI officers, they would be greatly appreciated, as I'm not very good with naming. 

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Nice job with Chapter 2, I can't say I know who Jenkins is, though...

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Chuckles

Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

Chuckles:

Nice job with Chapter 2, I can't say I know who Jenkins is, though...

You don't know who Jenkins is?

He always helps you in the Halo Trilogy and and is with Sgt. Johnson.

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xbox Live Gamertag = SBDassassin21

Chuckles:

Nice job with Chapter 2, I can't say I know who Jenkins is, though...

Jenkins, a young, confident marine/ODST, has been featured in every fan-fic I have written.  He usually plays as the squads sniper, and always manages to stay alive, regardless of the situation.

I beleive that sums it all up. 

Also......

since I caught you, I would like to ask your opinion on an issue, the issue being grenades for PowerPlant (you did post on that thread, right)?  So, what grenade should occompany frags on this map (here's a grenade placement usage guide if you have any trouble).

So far I'm thinking of going with Frags + Plasmas, as spike grenades might unbalance the game, letting the defenders use them in addition to their rocket launcher to destroy the attackers warthog.  (also, I gave a weapon, vehicles and equipement diagram in the thread, so looking back over it may be a good idea).

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Oh, I see now.

I think I posted...but I'm not sure...spike would unbalance the game...I would go with plasma...but the flame grenades are an option too.

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Chuckles

Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

Chuckles:

Oh, I see now.

I think I posted...but I'm not sure...spike would unbalance the game...I would go with plasma...but the flame grenades are an option too.

Yeah, I think so too.  Thanks.

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I like where the story is going.Now i got an idea for a new FF.....just as soon as i finish TGW.

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[url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
[url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
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Chapter III is up, This one is the longest yet, but still pretty short...lol. 

Anyways, Please post your thoughts and/or suggestions.

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awesome plain awesome

and BTW i like the short chaps your making 

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Mr. Bacon:

awesome plain awesome

and BTW i like the short chaps your making 

Thank you.  I suppose short-thought out chapters are better than long-not thought out chapters, then again, long-thought out chapters are even better.

Anyways, what areas do you think I have room for improvement in?

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bob the marine1:

Mr. Bacon:

awesome plain awesome

and BTW i like the short chaps your making 

Thank you.  I suppose short-thought out chapters are better than long-not thought out chapters, then again, long-thought out chapters are even better.

Anyways, what areas do you think I have room for improvement in?

a little bit more character development would be nice

but don't go overboard with it

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Mr. Bacon:

bob the marine1:

Mr. Bacon:

awesome plain awesome

and BTW i like the short chaps your making 

Thank you.  I suppose short-thought out chapters are better than long-not thought out chapters, then again, long-thought out chapters are even better.

Anyways, what areas do you think I have room for improvement in?

a little bit more character development would be nice

but don't go overboard with it

Great, thanks for the suggestion,  I'll attemp to incorperate it in the next chapter.

Also, In the first two chapters (The Prolog and Chapter I) were intended to have some mystery as to who the characters were involved.  However, Chapters II and III were not, and for that I apologize.

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