Here is a small extract from chapter one, i will post the whole chapter tomorrow after i finish tweaking it:

 

“Both teams three and four will infiltrate the lower section and get in position, team two and my team one will board the upper sections, when I give the word we attack and make our way to the middle section,” Reja explained.

 

The other squad leaders nodded and left to brief their own teams, Reja turned to Lysl “Order seraph squadron vengeance to prepare for combat, they will need to cover our boarding craft.”

 

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looking GOOD killer!

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Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori.

it is sweet and honourable to die for ones country

Oh one more thing, there will be some things in chapter one that may seem to go against what happend in the war of doisac but all will be explained in time....

 

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Nice job Killer!

I didn't read War of the Doisac either...but i might, but I am currently reading another, might be a while...

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Chuckles

Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

Theres no rush, im trying to make this fic understandable to those that did not read twod but there will be a few references that you will not understand properly.

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Great start so far.

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Thanks, i will be putting the first proper chapter up when i finish my first version of chapter 3 so expect it up in about 30 - 40 minutes.

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Ok chapter one is up, please post your thoughts.

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i liked it, especailly there little contest in the beginning.

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

Uh oh. The sangheili better look behind them. Is that the new alien that you were thinking of adding in on the war of doisac?

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No, its just a souped up thingy, i may or may not add another race or possibly use one of the covenant races that never made it into the game, that is if i can get enough information on them.

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Nice chapter! One problem though, it's small: You put "They returned fir"

I think you meant. "They returned fire"

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Chuckles

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No it is their new tactic, they take bags of fir tree needles into combat and throw them at the enemies.

 Lol ok ill change that now.

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Nice, although it kind of sounds like a flood form is watching them. I for one would like them to use the fir tactic. :-)

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There is no flood in this, probably will be in my third fic though.

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