chapter 3 will be up saturday.

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

oh cool, same day as mine.

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Im changing my update days to monday, wednesday, and friday. This allows me to be on a different schedule than another awesome fic and gives me the weekend to type the weeks chapters. So chapter three will be up friday.

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

Hey those are the days i dont put mine up, haha no one likes sunday

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Who does it on Sunday? Anyway who cares I do mine when I feel like it, it gives you that lazy care free fealing. Also check out mine if you have time... it's short but it's a work in progress. The link to my Fan-Fiction story is in my signature.

You have the worst fan fic ever, Legendary Halo.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just kidding, its quite the opposite really.

 

very good fan fic

keep up the good work

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i make peoplez

Yet another good chapter, 343.

Just a useful hint. When a bit of speech is followed by "he said", use a comma instead of a period. And never have a capital letter for "he said" or "he shouted" after a bit of speech.

For example:

“All men to your stations. URF are rushing the trenches.” Shouted the captain.

should be

"All men to your stations. URF are rushing the trenches," shouted the captain.

Otherwise, no errors. Good chapter, keep it up.

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Next chapter will be up in four hours.

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

chapter three is up

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

that was a very quick four hours lol

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Sweet! I like it!

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^Good job clicking that Edit button, Spartan.^

Hope you are having a good time at Relic, Thunder!

Pretty good and by the way eliteslayer, you had me confused for a couple seconds.

Another good chapter, 343.

I just have one question: how close were those nukes from the trenches? I mean, I accept that their blast radius is small, but what about the extent of radiation, wouldn't that be a major threat to the people in the trenches?

No spelling or grammar errors that I could see, so my job here is, thankfully, done.

Good work, keep it up.

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I think i included that the mud literally cased them, it may seem morbid but being covered in bodies and mud slowed down the radiation effects and allowed them to leave the damage radius before they suffered any side effects of the radiation.

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

343Mccutcheon_spark:

I think i included that the mud literally cased them, it may seem morbid but being covered in bodies and mud slowed down the radiation effects and allowed them to leave the damage radius before they suffered any side effects of the radiation.

Okay. Must have missed that, thanks for pointing it out.

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