Great work so far. Nice to see a story that's about something other than the infantry.

Sorry, but so far nothing specific I want in the story.

You mentioned you were a published author? Not asking for your real name, but what are the titles of the books you've written? If you don't mind telling us, that is.

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Well, I didn't actually write a book I just got some poems in a poetry book.  But those poems a professional poet liked and he wanted them in his book.

 

BTW Good fan fic!  It was nice to see playboy get mowed down!  lol

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Nice! Cool ff!

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Hornets are not Space craft.

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http://www.halowars.com/forums/273577/ShowThread.aspx#273577

Yea, I know.  The carrier doesn't only carry spaceborn vehicles.  I assume the the carrier can go into high orbit and unleash the hornets via hangers.

Also, its been a while sense I read Fall of Reach so srry if I get some of the battle wrong.

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Chapter 3 is done!  I'm not experianced in battle scenes but I think it is good.

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Chapter 4 is completed

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good job, i like fan fics with a lot of space battles, so i like this one.=]

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if only i knew how to put a picture here i would.

Playboy didn't get mowed down, he got his spine snapped by a Brute. lol

Just read the latest chapters. Excellent work, those battle scenes were brilliant.

Poet, eh? It does show in the story, adds a good descriptive element to it.

This is a great story. Keep it up.

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-Me

Storm the gates of Hell

Yes...do continue....

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First Blood Chapter 21 is up
Thanks to everyone who made my sigs!
Ut acerbus terminus...

Thanks.

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Its been a while, but chapter five is done.

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Bump*

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Great chapter, Kiewefrog.

Poor Grunt, though. Kind of pity it...

Good work, keep it up.

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"There is no heroism in battle; only people putting aside their fears to save the men next to them."
-Me

Storm the gates of Hell

There!  I have been taking a break from writing but i finally got chapter 6 done!  I'm no good at copying transmitions like in the books, but I tried.  Once summer is here, I will have a lot more time to write!

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