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The Great War(FF)

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  •  05-14-2008, 12:13 AM 228968 in reply to 228964

    Re: The Great War

    Let me guess the Germans were trying to create a Superhuman / Super race so they created Sgt. Johnson or maybe Spartans? 

    I know its a wild guess.


    Is the word N a z i s a bad word why do they block off the word when I say it? Hey guys try to say that word.
     



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  •  05-14-2008, 6:10 AM 229125 in reply to 228968

    Re: The Great War

    Ch.2

       Linda Nickson looked out the small window in her bedroom.It was five thirty in the morning.She got out of bed and started getting ready to go to work.She tied up her long black hair and put on her work boots .She had just got the new job at the factory.She didn't want to get hurt.She grabbed her gloves and walked into the kitchen to fix a large sandwich for lunch.

       As she began to walk out the door she saw Henry's picture in the hallway.They had been planning to marry that year when the Japs had sucker punched the U.S at Pearl Harbor.Like many men of twenty,Henry felt that he owed it to his country to enlist in the Army.That had been two years ago.A hot tear rolled down her cheek.This was why she went to work at five thirty,why she didn't take a job as an accountant,as a typist.She wanted to be directly involved in keeping her fiance alive.

       She walked out the door and walked to the bus stop.It was chilly but once she got inside the factory,cold would be her last worry.Cold isn't exactly strange in New York.The bus pulled up to the curb and popped the doors open.She quickly got on and took her usual seat.There he is...again.Every day,there was this short little nut job.He would yell about "purple flashes" and how aliens were real.He had to be off his nut.Her train of thought went back to Henry.It always did.He always sent her letters.Thoase were one of the things she looked forward to every month.But,she shivered,she never,not as long as the war lasted wanted to see a Western Union messenger.She never wanted to see the U.S Army stamped letter,never see"We are sorry to inform you..."Many of her closest friends had lost their husbands.Some couldn't take the strain.She hoped she never would know if she could.The bus jerked to a stop."25th street! 25th Street!."She got up and as she stepped off she heard the strange man laugh."Those who do not believe,will never believe."What a nutjob she thought as she got off.

       She walked down the street until she got to the factory.It was one of the larger Artillery manufacturing plants in the area.She walked in and was greeted with the heat and cacophony of noise that the factory made just as much as Artillery.She clocked in and got on the assembly line.She had a relatively simple job.Bolt tires securely to each other.She relished the slow pace that the morning started at.Soon,it would go much faster.

       The floor inspector suddenly appeared behind her."Well,hello darlin."He was a Southener who liked to have fun with his woman work force.He lightly touched her backside.Linda wished the sick bast ard had gotten drafted.But,sadly,he was missing an arm.So he got to stay here and fondle his workers.Most never complained for fear of losing their job.If she didn't aknowledge him,he would usually move on to another unlucky worker.

       She slowly began to fall into a rut.Time passed in a blink of an eye.Before she new it the alarm screamed."Another day..."She sighed and clocked out.She left and got on the bus.That strange man wasn't there anymore.Weird.She disliked him but...he was always there.She shrugged it off and went home.

     



    The Great WarCh.5 is up
    Caba's JourneyDone
    2
  •  05-14-2008, 6:13 AM 229129 in reply to 229125

    Re: The Great War

    Can't wait.


    New fan fic Frontline Chapter 1 now up
  •  05-14-2008, 6:19 AM 229132 in reply to 229129

    Re: The Great War

    this is good


  •  05-14-2008, 6:24 AM 229134 in reply to 229132

    Re: The Great War

    Nazi...was it blocked?

    nope...guess not...does that answer your question?


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  •  05-14-2008, 6:52 AM 229151 in reply to 229134

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    Re: The Great War

    That's odd the last time someone said that it was. I had to explain why it was and had to keep saying National socialist party.
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  •  05-14-2008, 7:27 AM 229165 in reply to 229151

    Re: The Great War

    Oops, nevermind.

    Kinda just contradicted myself.


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  •  05-14-2008, 7:39 AM 229169 in reply to 228588

    Re: The Great War

    Henry Benniger is certainly the marksmen lol.

    Did you play a lot of Wolfenstein games????

    This story is actually very interesting.

    Could've had a simpler, easier to read layout.

    No spelling mistakes, good grammar...but remember the start of sentences don't need to be so close to a full stop.

    Good work.

    *Thinks of German heads exploding...then thinks of NT who is 50% German himself. Suddenly is ashamed of thinking these evil thoughts*

     




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  •  05-14-2008, 8:13 AM 229179 in reply to 228592

    Re: The Great War

    Nice! I like the title!
  •  05-14-2008, 8:17 AM 229182 in reply to 229179

    Re: The Great War

     Yay! Keep going, I want to read more.  ^_^
    Truth is your shield and your sword. Deception is your enemy and your Weakness. Treat both Truth, and Deception with Respect.
  •  05-14-2008, 8:19 AM 229183 in reply to 229182

    Re: The Great War

    I second that.

    Lots of action...very much like it.




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  •  05-14-2008, 4:12 PM 229401 in reply to 229183

    Re: The Great War

    don, i officially have a new favorate fan fic...and let it be know, people...

    great chapter don...


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  •  05-14-2008, 5:15 PM 229463 in reply to 228968

    Re: The Great War

    Ch.2 is up.

    The Great WarCh.5 is up
    Caba's JourneyDone
    2
  •  05-14-2008, 5:27 PM 229478 in reply to 229463

    Re: The Great War

    Ch.3

       Nigel Zelt woke up in his tent.He got up on his elbows and looked around.Still dark.If this kept happening,the Sturmbannführer would have his ass in a sling.He needed to not feel as though bricks were tied to his feet.He layed on his back and willed himself to sleep.He rememberes his peaceful days.Before this war destroyed his life.

       When he lived out in Eastern Germany.He would play with friends,without fear of some yankee sniper.Then Hitler rose to power.He...He was a baloon.Full of himself.He only caused trouble.Enlisting all the capable men,deporting 'unreliables' that Nigel had been friends with since childhood.The hypocrisy of his serving still tasted sour in his mouth.But,he still felt a pride in the Fatherland.He would throw away his life for it.The SS were not soldiers.They were Untermenschen in fancy suits.They were curs who sucked up to the Party.He hoped never...to...be...

       A whistle started to sound in the background."The hell?"He murmered as he remembered where he was."Schiza!"He sprang up and started getting dressed.If he was late to roll,Sturmbannführer Fritz would...be most unhappy.The Sturmbannführer was a vicious thirty year old who loved to take out his anger on the dumb ass' that he caught.He was feared within the group.Many believed that the Devil had told him that if he calmed down,that he could be next in line.Of course,he was fair.He never made a trumped up charge.This earned many of the mens respect.But god help you should he find anything on you.

       Nigel got to roll just in time.He got in position and prayed he hadn't been overly noticed.The roll went on as normal.He had gotten away with it.He broke off from formation and started to help break down camp.Having twenty men,it didn't take too long.Nigel shouldered his weapon,a new Gewehr 41.It was a new design that Nigel loved.No bolt.He had yet need it due to the replacement occuring only weeks ago.After camp was broken,they started out.Maybe that Yankee sniper will taste this bullet,Nigel mused as he marched.

      A small rippling of the Horst Wessel Song began.Nigel sang strongly and felt his heart burst with pride.This was his land.His Fatherlan-.A blue light flashed across the sky.Nigels entire squad looked up in amazement.There had been rumors of a new secret weapon but...Wow.This was the power of Fatherland.The squad soon began to function normally and continued marching.They were to investigate the recent sniper raid that took place two days ago.That sniper was becoming a legend.Nigel believed that there was no possible way it was just one.It was probably just multiple snipers.It was unimaginable that a single American could actually down thirty German soldiers.They marched until they got to a clearing.

       What was that?It was a smoldering wreck.The squad,disregarding the leaders orders got closer and looked around the wreck to see what on Earth it was.There were creatures all over the ground.Short stocky things that looked as if a pig could walk.Tall ones that looked like chikens on Nigels farms bred with a super computer.They had no idea that they were looking at the remains of a failed Covenant landing.



    The Great WarCh.5 is up
    Caba's JourneyDone
    2
  •  05-14-2008, 5:31 PM 229481 in reply to 229478

    Re: The Great War

    me read second...

    ME WANT THIRD!!!

     

    great chapter don...


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