Im better with German than with Spanish.

Ich werde den ganzen noobs in der Welt zerstoren!

Redlightning:

 Im better with German than with Spanish.

Ich werde den ganzen noobs in der Welt zerstoren!

I'll assume that I've got a defective translator, otherwise you just said something along the lines of "I become the whole noobs in the world". I'll assume it's a defective translator and get another one.

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@ omega no this is new so ur still alive i need feed back so i can keep going

@Tiger i picked up noobs and thats about it

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Hunter_Killer_12:

Redlightning:

 Im better with German than with Spanish.

Ich werde den ganzen noobs in der Welt zerstoren!

I'll assume that I've got a defective translator, otherwise you just said something along the lines of "I become the whole noobs in the world". I'll assume it's a defective translator and get another one.

Yeah, thats definately defective. I said I will destroy all the noobs in the world.

Oh that makes sense...

ok back on topic i need feedback...

 

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Arby: Enforcer for the Corleone's:

@ omega no this is new so ur still alive i need feed back so i can keep going

@Tiger i picked up noobs and thats about it

The fan fic's pretty good, just need to know what the heck's going on, a good incentive to continue. Keep going.

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Arby: Enforcer for the Corleone's:

Oh that makes sense...

ok back on topic i need feedback...

I think its rather good. You should keep going.

Redlightning:

Hunter_Killer_12:

Redlightning:

 Im better with German than with Spanish.

Ich werde den ganzen noobs in der Welt zerstoren!

I'll assume that I've got a defective translator, otherwise you just said something along the lines of "I become the whole noobs in the world". I'll assume it's a defective translator and get another one.

Yeah, thats definately defective. I said I will destroy all the noobs in the world.

You sure you said it right? Every translator I've tried said the same thing. Maybe they all run on the same software or something.

And now my spamming ends.

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Redlightning:

Arby: Enforcer for the Corleone's:

Oh that makes sense...

ok back on topic i need feedback...

I think its rather good. You should keep going.

i am im gonna be gone for a bit writing it so peace out me amigos

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Hunter_Killer_12:

Redlightning:

Hunter_Killer_12:

Redlightning:

 Im better with German than with Spanish.

Ich werde den ganzen noobs in der Welt zerstoren!

I'll assume that I've got a defective translator, otherwise you just said something along the lines of "I become the whole noobs in the world". I'll assume it's a defective translator and get another one.

Yeah, thats definately defective. I said I will destroy all the noobs in the world.

You sure you said it right? Every translator I've tried said the same thing. Maybe they all run on the same software or something.

And now my spamming ends.

Yep, im sure thats what I said.

Edit: Just went on a translator to see what it did. It said almost exactly what you said. =/

@ Hammerboy, er, Arby.  Alright, see ya later.

Redlightning:

Yep, im sure thats what I said.

Edit: Just went on a translator to see what it did. It said almost exactly what you said

Which translator?

I know I said my spamming had ended, but I had to ask.

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im back here's another...

Chuckless and Arby walked towards the dock were Rock should be waiting. Arby slipped back into his thoughts. Arby paced through the hallways looking for…The Door. He saw it… looked it over. It looked no different from the others, except from the Gold trim that ran along the door frame. Arby rapped his knuckles on the door.

“Enter” Sounded a deep cold voice. He opened it and saw two men sitting in there chairs

“So, I assume I got a job”

“Yes, Yes You do” Said The Underboss

“Who’s it”

“Rock”

“What!”

“Keep your emotions in check around me Arby I have no patience for thee incompetent” Sounded the Cold voice again

“Sorry, Don”

“All is forgiven,” The Underboss cut in “Now as for Rock, He had a job, He failed to do it. Now don’t take me wrong Arby, I’m a forgiving person but this is the second time this has happed” The Don’s voice cut in

“As I had said I will not tolerate thee incompetent”

Arby felt his shoulder shake,

                “Look” Chuckless nodded in the direction of the docks. Arby looked…his eyes locked on those of the solitary shadow standing about fifty feet away

ok... for some reason it won't italicize but oh well

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Getting better. I like.

BTW, I PM'd Don, but it's only like 1am where he is, so I won't expect a reply for a while.

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he's usually on right now

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Arby: Enforcer for the Corleone's:

he's usually on right now

Okay. I'll just be patient then. Or try, anyway.

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