Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

Last post 05-22-2008, 9:06 PM by Arbiter1001. 73 replies.
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  •  04-26-2008, 10:07 AM 215199 in reply to 215192

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    Hey I had to write it fast so I didn't make the first one that good.
    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  04-26-2008, 11:24 AM 215262 in reply to 215199

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    Capter 2

    New York year: 2564 Arby and MC apartment

    "Arbiter come see this." MC shouted. The Arbiter came in and started to watch the tv.

    "13 people were found today with large holes in them and  strange creatures was found at the scene of the crime, scientist are studying them but all they can get is that these creatures are of spacial origin. We will bring more news late today." The newsreporter said.

    "This doesn't sound good I say we call a meeting." MC says

    <There already has been> Tony said from outsied their window. "Ironman." Arbiter said surprised. <Come on we called a meeting.> Ironman said.

    Stark building

    "So what do we plan on doing?" Toxin asked his fellow team mates. <REED HAS SAID THAT FROM WHAT HES SEEN IS THAT CREATURES CAME OUT OF THESE PEOPLE AND RAN OFF....... TOWARD NEW YORK.> Ironman said

    "I think we should go around and recon the city to see were these things are." Captain America said.

    "Oy will this be done by lunch?" Spiderman asked. "Spider this is serious lots of people could be killed soon." Anthnoy said as he came in.

    "We could go and scout around if you want." MC said. "No we should do it as a group who knows whats out there." Arbiter said.

    "You heros are all taking this as if its not serious." A voice said. The heros turned around to see quite a surprise. 'Venom." Spiderman said.

    "Good to see you to Parker." Venom said with a sneer. "Why are you here Venom." Anthony said calmly.

    "I want to join your team." Venom answered. Everyone became dumbstruck. Venom wants to be a Avenger? Thats a first.

    "Why should we let a mad man in the group huh Brock?" Spiderman said angrily. " I want to help the innocent and I fought one of those things and Parker my grudge against you is over I want to be your ally." Venom answered.

    <HMM..... FINE YOU CAN JOIN THATS ALL I NEEDED TO HEAR FOR HIM TO JOIN.> Ironman finally said.

    "Same here" MC and Arbiter said. Finally everyone agreed even Spiderman.

    "We'll be going now." MC said. "Alright but call us if you find anything strange." Captain America said.

    Streets of New York

    MC and Arbiter were walking down the sidewalk when they heard something. They went into a nearby Alley and found a horrifying scene.

    A Predalien was impregnanting women in the alley way.

    "You monster!" MC roard as he saw the scene. The Predalien finished infecting a woman and turned to roar at MC and the Arbiter.

    They ran at the Predalien with plasma swords ablaze. The Predalien dodged the swords and swung its tail at them. They narrowly dodge it and swing again. This time the predalien grabed both their arms and pullecd the swords from their hands. It threw MC aside and turned to the Arbiter and roared its mandibles streched out as it roared. The Arbiter pulled a little stick that was attached to his waist and pressed a button to reveal a plasma staff. They ran at eachother and slamed their bodies against eachother causing a small shockwave. As the predalien tried to stab the Arbiter with its tail Arbiter grabbed it and shoved it into the monsters head. A ungodly screech came from the monster as it shock its head in pain. The Arbiter than wrapped his arm around the creatures neck and rammed it into the nearby wall as hard as he could. He rammed its head into the wall so hard it exploded and the blood started to melt the wall.

    "Acid blood." The Arbiter sneered. "What did I miss?" The MC asked surprised. "Just me killing this abomination." The Arbiter said

    "We should get the avengers." Mc said. "Agreed they can help get thee woman to the hospital." Arbiter said as they ran toward the Stark building.

    To be continued.

     


    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  04-26-2008, 11:43 AM 215266 in reply to 215262

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    Wow no one has realized I put chapter 2 up.
    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  04-26-2008, 11:48 AM 215268 in reply to 215266

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    no, it's just that... well... ummm... *cough*... no one cares... you really only get replies from people who care about fan-fics, which is a small fraction of the HW forum community, so... there's your answer.

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    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  04-26-2008, 11:50 AM 215271 in reply to 215268

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    You sound like you don't like this story so why come to this thread and reply?


    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  04-26-2008, 12:22 PM 215288 in reply to 215266

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    Arbiter1000:
    Wow no one has realized I put chapter 2 up.

    hey dude im all with u but one question. Why will the Arbiter be in an apartment with the Master chief? the arbiter is on sanghelios. (elite homeworld) and the Master chief is MIA. and if the chief was found he wouldnt be in an apartment he'd probly be on some mission



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    "As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley
  •  04-26-2008, 12:25 PM 215291 in reply to 215271

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    Arbiter1000:

    You sound like you don't like this story so why come to this thread and reply?

    didn't say I didn't like it, just pointing out a fact of the forums, Mine has been up for ages and I've gotten little feed back on it. 


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    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  04-26-2008, 12:54 PM 215300 in reply to 215288

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    Ten years from timeline. Also how else would I get them in the same place and the same team of heros? I sure ain't gonna have a thing on sangihil and him leaving to come here. Also its a big old apartment not some small thing. Also Arbiter is here to examine the human culture and if you want MC to be on a mission then its his mission to show Arby around.


    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  04-26-2008, 12:56 PM 215301 in reply to 215300

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    Arbiter1000:

    Ten years from timeline. Also how else would I get them in the same place and the same team of heros? I sure ain't gonna have a thing on sangihil and him leaving to come here. Also its a big old apartment not some small thing. Also Arbiter is here to examine the human culture and if you want MC to be on a mission then its his mission to show Arby around.

    But why an apartment? why not walking through the city showing him all the improvements in technology the human race has made?



    Halo: TCW
    "As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley
  •  04-26-2008, 12:59 PM 215304 in reply to 215301

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    That would be boring heck check before the predalien attack their walking down the street use your imagination.

    What the? why is my fanfic a link to google.


    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  04-26-2008, 2:24 PM 215365 in reply to 215304

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    .......Do people want me to stop making fanfics........
    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  04-26-2008, 5:56 PM 215569 in reply to 215365

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    Well, that is a hard question though.But I liked some of your fanfics although not all of them.(Opinion) I think to appeal to the audience you should explain or give a brief background like why the Arbiter and MC is there. And also if you are making another fanfic try to have a more likable cahracters like I'm not really a big fan about all those Marvel characters. 






  •  04-26-2008, 6:00 PM 215574 in reply to 215365

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    Chapter 3

    "Mister Stark are you seeing this?" Asked a shield operative. "I Wish i'm not." Tony answered disgusted. In the corner of a alley 2 people were hanging upsidedown with no skin on their body.

    "What would you say about this Venom?" Tony asked. "This is not the work of those monsters." Venom answered.

    "Wait sir we're picking up movement. *Roars* wait, oh oh god, wait! NOOOOOOO!! *Sound of blades cutting through flesh.*"

    "Unit 5 can youi hear me?! UNIT 5!!" Stark desperatly shouted into the intercom. "Their gone...." MC said as he appeared in the door.

    "I just wanted to let you know that we're having a meeting." MC said lowly. "Alright I'm coming." Tony finally answered.

    "Sheesh now we got people around town being skinned, what is this Freddy vs Jason?" Spiderman answered.

    "Spiderman this is no time to joke the aliens are still at large and now people are ending up dead and skinned around town." Toxin said annoyed

    "That was a joke?" Spiderman said. "Enough I do have some good news." Anthony said with a hint of hope it. "Alien are you ready to tell everyone what you told me?" Anthony asked as a Alien appeared from the shadows. " The hell are you playing at Anthony?" Captain America shouted in shocked.

    "You are not the only one that hates whats going on I have become digusted with my hive and how they use young women as our host." The Alien answered. Venom lunged at the Alien but is knocked aside by Anthony. "You fool you let the enemy come to us!" Venomed shouted.

    "Listen to his story first." Anthony answered. He looked to the Alien and it nodded. "It all happened 12 hours ago..............

    12 hours ago

    "Don't be a fool my child you can't truely think that." A Predalien said. "Cause theres nothing to think about i'm leaving the hive mother." The Alien answered angrily. " I wish I didn't have to do this child." The Predqueen said as other Aliens appeared. "You were my best Warrior but now you've turned on me, To betray the queen is unforgivable." The Predqueen sneered. Just then 2 Aliens lunged at the rebelious one but were caught in midair by it. "Brother Sister forgive me." It whispered as it slamed both of their heads together crushing them. "Do not go after him our swarm will soon start again." The Predqueen snickered.

    Present time

    " I was then found by Anthony and told him my story.' The Alien finished.

    "But I killed the "Predalien" as you say it, shouldn't there be no "Queen"?"  The Arbiter asked confused.

    "No you killed one Predalien the last one evolved into a predqueen, even worse then a normal queen." The Alien answered

    "So why are you here though?" Tony asked. "I would like to join your team I want to stop my brethern." The Alien answered.

    The room fell silent. "We'll give you a chance." Captain America finally answered. "But cap." Spiderman said.

    "He could prove useful later. So then welcome to the Avengers uh whats your name?" Captain America asked.

    The creature thought for a moment then answered "Call me Outcast." Outcast answered.

    "Alright then welcome to the team outcast." Tony said smiling.

    "He won't be for long." a deep voice said behind them.

    They all turned to see something surprising.

    "Well......... That different." MC finally said.

    To Be Continued


    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  04-26-2008, 6:07 PM 215579 in reply to 215574

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    Nice i really like how you make the story ..... well you know how you have to wait for the next chapter to finds out who it is. Nice work!






  •  04-26-2008, 6:16 PM 215585 in reply to 215579

    Re: Fanfic Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel

    I'll give you a hint its as tall as a Elite and as 4 mandibles like them.
    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



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