Sorry guys i got grounded, read the sig.

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

December the 15'th, go here! ^^

JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

Chapter 11 is up.

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

December the 15'th, go here! ^^

JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

I guess i better do a Prologue soon becasue i am loosing readers! lol

Maybe mine and Yammys new FF will do better.

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

December the 15'th, go here! ^^

JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

It's only been an hour

I have to wait days for comments sometimes >.<

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

To bad he logged off because im writing the first chapter now and need to know more of the plot so we can name the FF >:(

He just gave me the guidlines for the first chapter.........

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"

JumpingJet:

I guess i better do a Prologue soon becasue i am loosing readers! lol

Maybe mine and Yammys new FF will do better.

Maybe your readers are just not on at the moment. Like a certian member who needs to give me more of the plot ;)

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"

This wasn't too bad a chapter. It's got me looking forward to the next one.

Just a couple of errors. 

1. Remember, every time you have 'he said' after a bit of speech, end the speech with a comma, not a full stop.

2. They walk over...  walk should be walked.

3. Rilly told them they will need them...  will should be would because this is in past tense.

4. waited in there cells...  there should be their.

Good work, keep it up.

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Officialy offline as of April 4 Australian time.

The FF is wonderful despite the errors in it.

To bad my FF didnt turn out so good.

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My name can trick you.
I could be your worst nightmare.....or best friend.
The unlucky soldier is my new FF. chapter 4 is up.

Now i know i have said this many times befor but i can finally say, there IS a combat scene next! lol

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

December the 15'th, go here! ^^

JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

lol. i thought this was a great chapter once again, and i loved the ending.

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"I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass faster than a fat *** who sat down to fast"

If you don't like R!zZle BiZzl£ then you can shnizzle my nizzle

Thanks rizzel!

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

December the 15'th, go here! ^^

JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

really gd so far

yammy r u refering to me?

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http://www.fallenearthrpg.com?x=11281

A iranian peanut:

really gd so far

yammy r u refering to me?

No. I meant JJ

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"

lol Yammy, i send you my chapter tonight! ;-)

 

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

December the 15'th, go here! ^^

JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

JumpingJet:

lol Yammy, i send you my chapter tonight! ;-)

 

Ok, still trying to work out some things in my chapter.

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"