Wolverfrog49:

So anyway I only skimmed the latest part of this story without bothering to read the rest of it, but I'll go ahead anyway and obnoxiously give ignorant feedback on it. It seems very Lord of the Rings, too much so, and everywhere I keep seeing cliches. It seems to be about people who always get cornered and yet somehow always make it out alive, whilst the rest of their soldiers die.

Who will nearly die before inevitably making it out of an impossible scrap next week? Find out in next week's "Generic Lord of the Rings clone!" 

Lord of the Rings because it has fantasy elements? It's good that you take time out to "Read" something I put work into, just because you feel bitter. Have fun atop your mountain. I'll sit here in the dirt, just praying for one reader -.-

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SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.

Offensive Bias:

Wolverfrog49:

So anyway I only skimmed the latest part of this story without bothering to read the rest of it, but I'll go ahead anyway and obnoxiously give ignorant feedback on it. It seems very Lord of the Rings, too much so, and everywhere I keep seeing cliches. It seems to be about people who always get cornered and yet somehow always make it out alive, whilst the rest of their soldiers die.

Who will nearly die before inevitably making it out of an impossible scrap next week? Find out in next week's "Generic Lord of the Rings clone!" 

Lord of the Rings because it has fantasy elements? It's good that you take time out to "Read" something I put work into, just because you feel bitter. Have fun atop your mountain. I'll sit here in the dirt, just praying for one reader -.-

I was just proving a point OB. You can't judge something by reading one chapter half way through the story. I'm sure this is actually very good, and if I ever get the time I'll try and read it all.

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"This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.

Wolverfrog49:

Offensive Bias:

Wolverfrog49:

So anyway I only skimmed the latest part of this story without bothering to read the rest of it, but I'll go ahead anyway and obnoxiously give ignorant feedback on it. It seems very Lord of the Rings, too much so, and everywhere I keep seeing cliches. It seems to be about people who always get cornered and yet somehow always make it out alive, whilst the rest of their soldiers die.

Who will nearly die before inevitably making it out of an impossible scrap next week? Find out in next week's "Generic Lord of the Rings clone!" 

Lord of the Rings because it has fantasy elements? It's good that you take time out to "Read" something I put work into, just because you feel bitter. Have fun atop your mountain. I'll sit here in the dirt, just praying for one reader -.-

I was just proving a point OB. You can't judge something by reading one chapter half way through the story. I'm sure this is actually very good, and if I ever get the time I'll try and read it all.

I never actually even skimmed through it. I saw the comments about who shot who and I said that more as a joke at soaps than a jab at you.

I posted that in the morning, I was already a little grumpy and your comment annoyed me a little more. I apologise, it was very stupid of me.

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SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.