NHDragon-151:

honestly, id like to see some sort of Elite involvement. like they could send a ship to find out how the humans are doing, and they end up encountering the flood. this could happen while the humans are making their last few stands (like towards the end of the story) when they jump in-system. they send a phantom down with some reinforcements while the ship would either become infected or send for help. Happy ending = Elites save humanity. unhappy ending = Elite ship is infected and everyone dies.

As crunch time comes closer and closer you'll see that I've decided to not include them. My thinking is that after the war, the Elites wanted nothing to do with the humans or the Loyalists.

gruntmaster:

well, thats a disappointment. 

Now, now. Don't lose faith in me. I'm sure you'll love the way it ends.

gruntmaster:

Jeteye, i have all trust in the world for you when it comes to FFs. You can count on that

Wow, thats probably the nicest thing anybodys ever said to me on a forum. Thanks! It should be done by today and posted by Saturday.

NHDragon-151:

ive no doubt that ill like the story, but it disappoints me to find that nobody ever includes the elites in their fan-fics... sangheili ftw.

Sorry, but the novel was already preplanned. Come to me sooner next time and I'll implement your ideas.

you want early? well in the next fan fic bring out the elites gosh darn it!

you are good at fan-fics, like gruntmaster said. cant wait to read it. how many Word pages is it?

NHDragon-151:

you want early? well in the next fan fic bring out the elites gosh darn it!

you are good at fan-fics, like gruntmaster said. cant wait to read it. how many Word pages is it?

Sadly, this is my last one. It's around 30 pages.

halo wars3000:

itwas good a little flaw though grvemind died in halo 3. so how come hes back and how did Omega keep grvemind alive!?!?

Omega 12 was a Flood research facility built by Kane several years ago using embezzled funds from ONI. After the Flood missiles are launched and the Flood take over, a new Gravemind is constructed from biomass and calcium.

gruntmaster:

come on, were dyeing for chapters!

It's been out for three days. Sorry I didn't tell you. It might be on the second page. Take a look.

This has got to be one of the best Fan-fics ive read. =D

   Its almost like reading one of Eric Nylunds books.

Two thumbs up!

For anyone who missed it:

http://halowars.com/forums/thread/195951.aspx

Halo: The Defense of Humanity is out and has a crapload of extra features. Please comment on it after you read. ^_^