[FF] True Sangheili (Part 20 is available!) ~ 3 May

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  •  07-24-2009, 5:44 PM 667158

    [FF] True Sangheili (Part 20 is available!) ~ 3 May

    New story by me, and my first about the Covenant. I didn't like Seed of Orion, so I'm exchanging it for this. Thanks for reading.

     Prologue

    Edict of the Most High Prophet of Truth, 9th Age of Reclamation.

    By the authority of the noble Prophets of Truth, Regret, and Mercy.

    Henceforth, any and all battle worthy Sangheili are to be transferred from any idle posts in High Charity and/or upon any Covenant held world/ship into the active combat. Those amongst the excused are the Honour Guard, the Councillors, and the mentally ill, physically unfit, and the old. Female Sangheili are, as always, prohibited from taking part in any military action.

    Any Sangheili engaged in a guard post, other than the Honour Guard, will be replaced by the Jiralhanae until such a time as the High Council deems otherwise. Any Jiralhanae in question of where they now stand shall direct all enquiries to Tartarus, Chieftain of the Jirahanae.

    Failure to adhere to this edict will result in death. No exceptions. These are trying times, my brothers. The Human infidels persist in resisting the might of the Covenant. Rest assured, this 'war' as some are calling it, will be over soon -- to be forgotten and dismissed as an insignificant event in Covenant history.


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  07-24-2009, 5:44 PM 667159 in reply to 667158

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Part one - Sorran

    Sorran cursed his bad luck. After centuries of peace, a war had to break out in his lifetime. And this wasn't the kind of war the Covenant was used to -- a rebellion, or a species to be absolved into their empire. The humans were smart, ruthless, and mighty warriors. Whilst the may use old technology, it was effective. Many a Covenant soldier had died at the hands of a crude human projectile.

    The High Council had realised the threat these humans posed to the Covenant, and so every battle worthy Sangheili had been drafted into the Covenant. Sorran missed the days as a scribe in the Great Library of High Charity. A job usually reserved for the Prophets, it had taken much study on his part to finally be accepted into the library. And now all this.

    Sorran looked down at the Plasma Rifle he held within a long hand with disgust. He'd never a fired a weapon in his life, never expressed a desire to do so. Yet here he was now, garbed in the traditional blue armour of a Sangheili Elite minor. He looked into a puddle at his feet, and was surprised by how warrior-like he looked.

    Then again, every Sangheili was like that. Even before the days of the Covenant, theirs had been a militaristic society. Little had changed. Sorran looked every part the noble Sangheili he was supposed to be -- a little over eight foot tall, with narrow eyes and sharp teeth upon his mandibles. He resented that.

    He brought up a hand to admire the way his energy shield flared ever so slightly as the patter of heavy rain fall bounced off it. At least that was a bonus of being a Sangheili in this war, Sorran mused as he looked over at a huddle of Grunts, desperately trying to gather what little warmth they could from the small, flickering fire. One Grunt was getting a little too close to the flames...

    "Careful there!" Sorran called over, "Methane is a flammable gas, and your mask is a little too close to that flame Unggoy."

    The five diminutive figures instantly all drew away from the fire, suddenly eyeing it as if were a deadly predator. A few moments later however, they shrugged and drew up to the flame again, in just as much of a precarious position as before. Sorran sighed, and turned away. He walked over to his superior, a Sangheili Major, who had been observing the Grunts with amusement.

    "You waste your words on them my brother; Unggoy are notorious for being extremely dim witted." The Major remarked, crossing his arms smugly.

    "Perhaps. Yet they are under our command, and we should strive to keep them safe, no matter how futile the endeavour may be." Sorran replied, disliking the way the crimson coloured Sangheili talked about them as if they were dogs.

    The major cocked his head to one side, and looked at Sorran in an evaluating manner.

    "I don't think I've seen you around these parts before brother. Are you new?" The major asked, as if he personally knew every Sangheili which roamed the outpost. Which, Sorran thought, he probably did.

    "Yes, I'm new. Until a few weeks ago, I was a scribe in the Great Library of High Charity. Suddenly, I'm drafted and sent out here. My name's Sorran." He said, holding out a hand. The major looked uncertain for a moment, then grabbed Sorran's hand in a firm grip and shook it, once.

    "Zharn." The major said simply. Sorran assumed it was the major's name. "So, the Great Library. You must not have seen much combat action there." It was a statement, no a question.

    Sorran nodded in agreement.

    "That's right. I've never fired a weapon in my life. Never planned to."

    Zharn smiled.

    "Well then, we shall have to remedy that. We can't have the Unngoy outstripping you in combat. But for now, we shall eat, and we shall talk. Now tell me, is High Charity truly as wondrous as they claim it is? I have always wished to visit."

    "Ah, it is a truly wondrous sight Zharn. I am not usually a very religious person; I believe in the Great Journey, don't get me wrong. To suggest otherwise would be blasphemy. But I prefer the solid facts my scrolls give me. Yet when I behold the Forerunner Dreadnought in the morning as I walk though the holy city, it makes me want to get down on my knees and pray." Sorran replied eagerly, glad that they both had a point of interest.

    "I was once going to embark upon a pilgrimage to High Charity once." Zharn remarked, staring into the Unngoy's fire in the distance. The rain echoed, distorting his words. "But my father fell ill, and so I had to tend to him back on Sangheilios. He died, soon after. The Covenant didn't give me much time to grieve though. I was called back into duty a day afterwards."

    Sorran hesitated a moment, then placed a consoling hand upon Zharn's shoulder.

    "I'm sorry for you loss." The Sangheili Minor said. "I too know what's it's like to lose a family member to an illness. My dear sister, Forerunners preserve her soul, died but a year back."

    Zharn grunted, and shook off his hand.

    "Let us dispel these melancholy thoughts brother. Come, we should eat. I hear the Kig-yar have been cooking up a stew. I'd better be there to make sure an offensive Unggoy doesn't become part of it. "

    Sorran laughed at what he thought to be a joke, and followed after the Major. Zharn didn't laugh. Perhaps he wasn't joking after all.

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  07-25-2009, 2:44 AM 667742 in reply to 667159

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Awesome as ever, but I'm intrigued to know the last names of these sangheili, and please describe the characters and names of the others under Zharn's command, I die a little inside when I see 2 marines kill 30 grunts without breaking a sweat.(this happens far too much in the library)

    Plus of course grunts are awesome, my favorite character in the haloverse is Yayap, so I hate to see them portrayed as the utter failures most writers prefer them to be, a lot of grunts are actually quite brave.


    Spess mehrens
  •  07-25-2009, 5:18 AM 667785 in reply to 667742

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Oh, don't worry Twiggy. My Grunts are going to be pivotal characters in this story. My favourite sections in Contact Harvest were the Dadab ones, so yeah, I won't make them out to be mindless dogs as Zharn thinks them to be. Well, some will though.

     As for their last names, I didn't really see a need to reveal that in the first part. But they'll come soon. 


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  07-25-2009, 5:41 AM 667804 in reply to 667785

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    That's good to know, I hate it when people concentrate purely on the elites or humans and make every other character from another race some form of stereotype, not all grunts are thick cowards, not all jackals are smart, malicious cowards, not all brutes are mindless thugs etc:

    Spess mehrens
  •  07-25-2009, 6:24 AM 667829 in reply to 667804

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Brutes will be featured in it. The whole of the Covenant will be.

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  07-25-2009, 6:39 AM 667840 in reply to 667829

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Good, btw it isn't out of the question to make up new races, the races seen in halo may represent the bulk of the covenant but they are by no means all of it.

    Spess mehrens
  •  07-25-2009, 9:18 AM 667964 in reply to 667742

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    twigggy:

    Awesome as ever, but I'm intrigued to know the last names of these sangheili, and please describe the characters and names of the others under Zharn's command, I die a little inside when I see 2 marines kill 30 grunts without breaking a sweat.(this happens far too much in the library)

    Plus of course grunts are awesome, my favorite character in the haloverse is Yayap, so I hate to see them portrayed as the utter failures most writers prefer them to be, a lot of grunts are actually quite brave.

     

    Is Yayap the grunt in the novel "Halo: The Flood" who leaves the Pillar of Autumn on a ghost and he brings some food with him and he explains to himself how he is happy to be away from that one elite (forgot his name). But yeah, is that him?


    Read my FF! Human-Covenant War: Without The Great Schism. It's an FF based upon how the war would have ended up if there was no Great Schism. There are a lot of twists and there is a lot of action!
  •  07-25-2009, 9:41 AM 667985 in reply to 667964

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    He's the one, the best part is that he's far smarter than said elite, which is rather ironic.

    Spess mehrens
  •  07-25-2009, 10:01 AM 667997 in reply to 667985

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    twigggy:He's the one, the best part is that he's far smarter than said elite, which is rather ironic.

    Actually, it isn't that ironic once you think about it. Elites tend to get cocky with their ego, and tend to think less for their safety and more of their honor. Remember that elite who wanted to take out Masterchief? He couldn't even think straight because he wanted all the glory of killing the chief, but remember how he dies. I started laughing lol.


    Read my FF! Human-Covenant War: Without The Great Schism. It's an FF based upon how the war would have ended up if there was no Great Schism. There are a lot of twists and there is a lot of action!
  •  07-25-2009, 10:03 AM 668000 in reply to 667997

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Yes, Grunts are sadly discriminated characters in the Halo Universe. I was thinking of making this story about one, but decided against it.

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  07-25-2009, 10:09 AM 668001 in reply to 668000

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Indeed, if you do decide to make a story about the grunt in the future I'm sure it will be made of win.

    Spess mehrens
  •  07-25-2009, 10:15 AM 668003 in reply to 668001

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Lol, I wonder how a story about Kwassass would turn out.

    Read my FF! Human-Covenant War: Without The Great Schism. It's an FF based upon how the war would have ended up if there was no Great Schism. There are a lot of twists and there is a lot of action!
  •  07-25-2009, 10:16 AM 668006 in reply to 668003

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Amazingly.

     


    Spess mehrens
  •  07-25-2009, 10:18 AM 668007 in reply to 668006

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    It would be amazing, until you get to the part where he dies XD.

    Read my FF! Human-Covenant War: Without The Great Schism. It's an FF based upon how the war would have ended up if there was no Great Schism. There are a lot of twists and there is a lot of action!
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