Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

Last post 05-23-2008, 8:17 AM by Russian 6th Guards Army -Ruski-. 58 replies.
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  •  03-04-2008, 9:24 PM 178215

    Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

    I plan on doing parts in the episodes so lets start.

    Chapter 1: Something new

    It wasa cloudy day, a brown pale color to be exact. A few days earlier something had come to earth and attacked, then the day earlier creatures appeared from under the ground attacking all humans. Suddenly at 2:00 PM a sudden rip in the universes sent 4 men flying to earth. One seemed to be from the mid 20th century the other 3 from the 22nd century. When they landed they all blacked out. "Uh were the hell am I?" Marcus asked himself when he awoke. He looked up to see two creatures dragging him across the ground. "I got to get away from these locust. Marcus thought to himself.

     Suddenly A sniper round flew through both creatures heads causing them to explode."Good to see your still alive Marcus." Dom said running up to him. "Took you long enough." Marcus said as Dom picked him up. "I dont think these are locust." Dom said to Marcus. "HUMANS! ATTACK!" A Chimera shouted out. "Aw s***." Marcus blurts out as they start exchanging fire with the Chimera. "Eat s*** and die!" Marcus shouted as he threw a grenade. The Chimera tried to jump away but were blown to bits by the grenade. "HA HA! That showed them!" Marcus said smirking.

     "Come on Dom lets find Cole." "Yeah." Marcus and Dom said to each other. "I have found the humans that came through the portal." A figure said in a destroyed building. "Good bring them back to base we need to know how they got here." A person said over the intercome.

    To be continued

    Well how was it?


    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  03-04-2008, 9:26 PM 178218 in reply to 178215

    Re: Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

    oh goody, for a second there i thought it was another locust VS halo thread
  •  03-04-2008, 9:34 PM 178227 in reply to 178218

    Re: Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

    I have to say as cheesy as this sounds, it could go somewhere.  Keep writing and we'll see how it turns out.

    Thanks Ryzza & Mr. Bacon for teaching me how to make these
  •  03-04-2008, 9:37 PM 178229 in reply to 178227

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    yeah it was nice i wouldn be suprised if they made a book like it
  •  03-04-2008, 9:40 PM 178234 in reply to 178229

    Re: Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

    I have to admit..that is VERY farfetched...


    Hey Ensemble, from all the stuff I heard about this game...You make me sick...
  •  03-04-2008, 10:18 PM 178254 in reply to 178234

    Re: Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

    I will need to think of the next chapter but if you have suggestions tell me on this thread.
    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  03-05-2008, 7:59 PM 178610 in reply to 178254

    Re: Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

    I'm gonna make chapter 2 soon and if you want suggest what you want in future chapters.
    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  03-05-2008, 8:13 PM 178618 in reply to 178610

    Re: Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

    I think its a good start so just keep going and maybe they will make a book out of it.

     

  •  03-05-2008, 8:14 PM 178619 in reply to 178610

    Re: Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

    suggestion. I am currently writing a sci-fi novel

    War with Gods 

    you should make the first chapter longer. Like make some more in it. Use my prologue as an example.

    oh and that prologue is not a halo fanfic...I'm seriously going to get it published 



    Hey Ensemble, from all the stuff I heard about this game...You make me sick...
  •  03-05-2008, 8:19 PM 178625 in reply to 178610

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    Still needs work what is a Chimera?

    One idea is that you could intergrate the characters without somekind of warp in the universe.

    An example Locust could come from the same galaxy and they were once chased by the Flood which would explain why are the Flood on this planet.

    #1 First this book needs a setting you did not even tell us the time or place. Remember this rule.

     


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  •  03-05-2008, 8:20 PM 178627 in reply to 178625

    Re: Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

    I have to agree...


    Hey Ensemble, from all the stuff I heard about this game...You make me sick...
  •  03-05-2008, 8:23 PM 178631 in reply to 178215

    Re: Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

    whats a Chimera???




  •  03-05-2008, 8:29 PM 178637 in reply to 178631

    Re: Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

    ROGUEDETAIL:
    whats a Chimera???
    i chimera is the aliens from resistance
    RHHH RHHH RHHH goes my chainsaw through your flesh... :)

  •  03-05-2008, 8:29 PM 178638 in reply to 178215

    Re: Gears of War vs Halo vs Resistance Episode 1

    I think u sould include more background in the first few chpts.
  •  03-05-2008, 8:31 PM 178641 in reply to 178638

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    Smirfy nice little grunt thing at bottom of post it was funny.
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